My first attempt at comedy

[kairaluvsu]

Ok guys, here's the deal. I have been thinking a lot lately about what I want to do with my life. I have always joked around about being a stand up comic, but I think that I seriously want to do this. I made an attempt at some material...so I'm gonna put it up here for you three (cause I know only 3 people read this) to see. I want feedback!

Comments

here's my take

[nikronster]

Hey babe- hows life? First off, I'm really glad you decided what you want to do, (cause I sure havent) but yeah- ok- totally love the whole "condescending bitch" thing, niiiice! (I had to learn that the hard way too) and hehe gatta love the blake stuff- you're a good kid! I have a friend who does stand-up here locally in Indy maybe you should talk to him, he's pretty young but he might be able to just tell you what it's like going out there and stuff? Something to think about! Miss you and love you lots- what's better than a marine doing push ups? A marine with his shirt off doing push ups!! lol good night!
~Nikki~

Re: here's my take

[kairaluvsu]

Nik...I've been talking to a few comedians who have been on comedy central...One of them even gave me their cell phone number...lol. But it'd be good to talk to an amateur too. What's your friend's email addy?

uhmm..

[nikronster]

well, sorry I didn't realize you were already so beyond my amatuers, so don't even worry about it- they probably wont meet up to your standards.

Re: uhmm..

[kairaluvsu]

Hahaha...don't be dumb. J/k...but really, you should give me their email addys! Cause I would love to get in touch! I MISS YOU!!

my two cents

[blackmudskipper]

Hey. Here's my opinion as a lover of good comedy. I think there's good stuff in there but it needs to be polished a bit