H18] SECRET LOVE STORY (4/4)

Jul 22, 2016 01:05





Prompt Code: H18
Title: Secret Love Story

Secret Love Story: Part 4 )

round 1: 2016, category: h

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fabulousandi July 22 2016, 01:41:00 UTC

Author-senpai,it was a beautiful fic,thank you for it .<3

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dksxkji August 15 2016, 12:55:06 UTC
thank you for reading it, too! i'm thankful for the feedback. glad you enjoyed it! <3

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aremdi143 July 22 2016, 03:34:52 UTC
This fic deserves more love. It's honestly beautiful because two people in love but can't show it to the world is truly hard. I love it especially the scene where Jongin asked Kyungsoo whether he loves him or not, Istg i'm holding my breath bc i feel sad for Jongin. But I'm glad that they sorted out their feelings in the end. I love this. Thank you for writing this.

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dksxkji August 15 2016, 12:57:16 UTC
thank you for the comment! thank you for reading the whole fic and loving it, too :) ikr. the feelings were critical, really, and i'm glad to hear that they reached you. haha

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anonymous July 22 2016, 07:08:36 UTC
HOW DO I START THIS COMMENT OMG I JUST HAVE TOO MUCH TO SAY.

first of all, i just wanted to say how amazing you are. this story has got me crying on the bus while on my way home lmao. i legit cried because it was too painful to bear--seeing how in pain J and K was. I knew this was a happy ending fic fest but i thought of the worst :( thankfully u made a wonderful ending + nice closure both for your characters! <3 ( ... )

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dksxkji August 15 2016, 13:05:37 UTC
*blushes* i'm not amazing, i just try. sorry i made you cry, tho. i hope no one was thinking you were weird at the bus ride home, though. :D too much compliments /hides and covers every part of my body/ but they're too sweet and I thank you~~ i don't deserve all them but i'm thankful nonetheless :)

truth be told, i'm glad that their characters were understood, i was really thinking and trying hard to see how to elaborate what i really wanted, so it feels exhilarating to hear you got affected by them. :) fun fact: kyungsoo's story came from somewhere, i had an inspiration hahaha kaisoo is true love for me- so yeah. thank you thank you thank you~~ <3

i'm happy you liked it! ^-^

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sunsethue July 22 2016, 08:08:59 UTC
Dear author, thank you for taking my prompt and making it this beautiful story. I expected it to be painful and angsty because of the prompt but this is one hell of a twist and turns of heartbreak and finally happiness. Despite how difficult it all was, Jongin's love was just too strong. Their love for each other...I feel so many emotions all at the same time because of them. Thank you for weaving Jongin and Kyungsoo into a story that portrays how love is for the people who are brave enough to fight for it. I love you!

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dksxkji August 15 2016, 13:09:55 UTC
and thank you for reading and commenting! well, i thought about it a lot and the angst and all is actually a fault of mine because i think- or make myself believe, really, that kaisoo are ones who fit well with the angst and painful romance chapter, making me write a story that is a little bit painful ;;; :D I want to apologize and thank you at the same time. I love you too!

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anonymous July 22 2016, 09:22:35 UTC
I cried this is too beautiful ;~~~; oh jongin my poor boy your love is so sincere. I feel like whacking kyungsoo and hugging him at the same time and im glad they find their way back at each other eventually.

AND WOWW THE SMUT IS HOT!! 🔥🔥🔥

Hehe thank you soooo much for this 😙

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dksxkji August 15 2016, 13:12:43 UTC
THANK YOU! :) i'm glad the story ended the way it did, too, actually hahaha ('cos it might've turned the other way around)

about the smut... lol i thought i was scared to write it at first but the prompt was NC-17 so... *blushes*

thank you for the comment, too~

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