This is one is good! I like it. The way you wrote the words, simple but beautiful, it felt like i entered their world lol (its true tho) thank you and dont you hv LJ's account? coz i saw you replied other comments as anon hehe
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anonymous
December 21 2016, 18:02:08 UTC
Okay. This was a very touching story between a father and a daughter. Of course I expected angst since the theme focused predominantly on Kyungsoo's life as a single dad and as a victim of bullying. I'd be frank. I thought Chanyeol, Luhan, Baekhyun, and Jongdae were massive assholes that needed some serious lecturing. If I knew them personally, I'd never hesitate to punch them in the throat for Kyungsoo. To be fair, I'm a hundred percent Jongdae because of the pizza scene: “Dude, make it three! The third box is mine only.” Also, what the fuck, man, they are friendship goals for watching porn together, which reminds me of one particular moment in real life. Lmao. *side-eyes you* Anyway, Luhan cracked me up. I couldn't help but imagine him screaming "She's going to cum!" at Jongin
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i rly enjoyed writing this one, but i had many issues with this fic lol and your comment lifted up my spirits so i feel so emotional right now. Thank you so much for commenting and for pointing out the things you like on my story. tho tbh i laughed when you mentioned that porn session lmao
i've been thinking about revising this, but thank you for telling that it doesn't need one. (tho i think it still needs one) ugh.
Ahhh this was such a very gooood read. I really like the moral of this story. Seriously. I spent almost two hours reading this and believe me, I don't regret it. To be honest, I was fucking bawling for hours after reading this. This is a rare story to find and I am glad that I stumbled upon on this. It is a type of story that hooks you until the end, leaving you with a warm, fuzzy feeling of life and love
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i rly enjoyed writing this one, but i had many issues with this fic lol and your comment lifted up my spirits so i feel so emotional right now. Thank you so much for commenting and for pointing out the things you like on my story. tho tbh i laughed when you mentioned that porn session lmao
i've been thinking about revising this, but thank you for telling that it doesn't need one. (tho i think it still needs one) ugh.
anyway thank you! i love you!!!!!
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