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Fic: Partings

Dec 16, 2009 15:17

Title: Partings

Author: kaitmaree77

Rating: PG 13

Warnings: Post ep Teamwork

Summary: She is crying and he is suffocating, loss rising within him once again.

Note: Short and angsty, let me know what you think, guys. Beta’ed by the amazing spyndisguise - thank you!

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( Anger swells quickly: anger and blame, anger and regret, anger and guilt. )

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Comments 11

bkwmkiwi December 16 2009, 06:27:47 UTC

Angsty as usual. You never disappoint :) of everything I've read of yours, that last line is one of the most beuautiful. I don't really know how to describe it, but it provokes a lot of emotion. Very nicely done :)

kaitmaree77 December 19 2009, 09:28:23 UTC

Thank you very much! So glad you liked it, angst-aside. <3

ikilledkenny86 December 16 2009, 16:00:10 UTC

Aww that was sad and heartbreaking but I loved it. I want to cry with Chase.

kaitmaree77 December 19 2009, 09:28:49 UTC

Glad you enjoyed it, thank you very muchly! :)

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kaitmaree77 December 19 2009, 09:29:15 UTC

Thanks so much! I really enjoy how that line came out, too. <3 :)

peachylinz1 December 17 2009, 02:10:43 UTC

You have such an amazing way with words!

'As if a part of him is inside of her' AWWWW

I also really loved the last line, captured how he was feeling perfectly.

BEAUTIFUL!

kaitmaree77 December 19 2009, 09:29:41 UTC

Thank youuu! So thrilled you liked it! :)

spyndisguise December 17 2009, 02:46:31 UTC

This was just gorgeous. I love your ability to say so much in every line, every word. It's simply stunning.

Wonderful job!! <3

kaitmaree77 December 19 2009, 09:29:54 UTC

Thank you so much! <3