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kajornwan

[Fic]Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 7

Apr 08, 2009 12:17

It took me a while to get back on track with Revelation. But here it is, a short chapter but I figure I should post something before I leave for Seychelles this Saturday and hopefully some divine intervention will make it so that I won't have to return XD (just kidding, kids will be waiting at home). I don't know if there's enough civilization ( Read more... )

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hsyang April 8 2009, 16:43:28 UTC

I like the construction of this chapter -- Fei dealing with his situation on one end and Misha doing what he has to do on the other. Hopefully they'll meet in the middle soon...

As usual, you made a very insightful observation about Fei's motives -- he had no intention to kidnap Akihito until after Akihito voluntarily returned and tried to spy on him.

And even though I already told you, I love this line so much that I just have to squee over it again:

I only drink Fei Long's tea

Misha has such good taste -- I wanna drink Fei Long's tea, too!

kajornwan April 9 2009, 03:55:07 UTC

I hope they will meet soon enough too. It's actually quite frustrating when I really want to move on the that part but must write the in between first:(

And I too don't think Fei planned anything. Poor Fei seemed quite confused and messed up to me in NT, not that everything else about NT wasn't messed up anyway. *sighs* But tha'ts why I do have a lot to complain about it enough to write a whole fic over this unclear mess.

I only drink Fei Long's tea
he he When I wrote it I intended it totally as a flattery but now that you mention it my mind went straight to the gutter. *faces wall*

ghoulein April 9 2009, 20:37:40 UTC

Oh, thank you a lot for continuation the story. I found Cruel Intentions just a few days ago and read the story in one day. It's really amazing. So I was a little worried to see Revelation not ended up. Now you've made me feel some relief ))) I'll be waiting for the next chapters and hope precious Fei to be at least happy with his Russian bear (will he?)

And one little remark concerning the short Christmas story. Russian Christmas is on January, 7 not on the same day as in Europe, States and others. But actually it doesn't spoil that nice story :)

kajornwan April 29 2009, 05:02:36 UTC

Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad you like it. Don't worry about Revelation. I swear by my life I will finish it because I already have in my head but I have very little time to write it down. I'll end it for me even if no one is reading it anymore. As for the ending I can only promise that Fei will find himself and his place in the world which is the goal of the story, other than that I'm not really a happy ending person XD.

I know about the Christmas story T_T Sorry about that. I should put a note there or delete the date or something. Thanks ^_^

angel0399 April 12 2009, 05:43:55 UTC

Wow! Love it! Mik better go and fight for his man! Can't wait to see the turn of events. :-D

kajornwan April 29 2009, 05:03:05 UTC

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it ^_^ Will try to update soon.

anonymous April 23 2009, 10:47:50 UTC

I ditched the A x A part..again XDDD
And danm the jerk. How dare he kissed Mik like that?? Wanna make Fei Fei jealous huh?? He really have guts. I'm gonna stitch his lips with a needle and rainbow-colored threads -_____-!
P/s: I'm still waiting for Heavenly-win II ^____^! and thanks for this update <3<3<3

kajornwan April 29 2009, 04:51:35 UTC

LOL I don't blame you. I always ditch the A x A part too when reading fic XD But I felt the need to write them a bit just to clarify things (a lot of things) that don't make sense in the manga.

LOL praise the jerk. I'm dying to see Fei being possessive of Mik. XD

P.S. Heavenly win is probably coming soon because I now know how to finish it ^_^ Just need to get work done first. Thanks for reading *hugs*

tradij April 26 2009, 08:23:51 UTC

ohh, i do love this story. i like the idea of telling everything out of an Mik/Fei- centered perspective, as in the manga theyre both a bit marginalized. definitely interesting. i hope youll continue it to the end, im looking forward to new chapters!

kajornwan April 29 2009, 05:06:46 UTC

They do get tossed aside too much indeed. And when Aki is such a simple minded guy plus Asami doesn't have thoughts in the manga, I feel the heart of the story never gets told. I will end this, I swear, I just haven't had time like before (2 kids now, as opposed to one back then XD) even if no one is left reading (Fei fans are checking out of the fandom everyday), I will end it for myself. Thank you for continuing to read.