[Fic]Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 7

[kajornwan]

It took me a while to get back on track with Revelation. But here it is, a short chapter but I figure I should post something before I leave for Seychelles this Saturday and hopefully some divine intervention will make it so that I won't have to return XD (just kidding, kids will be waiting at home). I don't know if there's enough civilization

Comments

[shen_ryuu]

Thank you for the new chapter =)))
Aw, geee, I didn't expect that turn with Philip Toh =_=

I'm looking forward to the update(s). I wonder will Fei really find his place and what this place will be? If you're not really a happy ending person, I'm kinda spooked >_< Don't tell me you'll not let Fei be together with Mik this way or another T_T

[kajornwan]

Thank you for continuing to read ^_

[emkyo]

Hehe, I like the way how you describe Philip Toh as the overly exaggerated version of Fei.
A filthy rich triad guy who is about as beautiful as our Dragon, but without his sophistication - that's exactly the person we need in order to point out that Fei is not merely charming by his assets (material and biological kind), but it's his demeanour and his personality which make him truly drop dead gorgeous. <3

[baby_fei]

You understand my purpose of creating Toh so precisely. I really wanted to prove Fei's quality beyond his beauty. One of the greatest joy in reading comments is when I know I can get my points across. Thank you ^_^

From my point of view, a well-written and heart-wrenching story is worth the death of one or even both main characters. That is exactly what I think. *glomps you* You're corrupting me. It is so hard to decide between a good story I will be most proud of and Fei's happiness. *yanks hair

[trimethoprim]

Hell what is this......recently I always need to reread old chapters of stories to recapitulate the storyline because I somehow get to read them like a month after posted *headdesk* geez (not that it's not enjoyable reading some things again and again *giggle*...but time issues, time issues).....I wrote half of this comment half a week ago, but then was too tired to finish it (funny but somehow I feel obligated to always give you constructive AND long comments, so its no use rushing it

[kajornwan]

LOL Don't worry. I know you have been busy and sick. And these days I too can't possibly do everything I want to do. I used to be able to answer every comments, discuss anything in lengths, participate, msn etc. These days I have to limit myself to very few things because it's just too much for me to handle

[mangagirl1]

Okay, You know that part in Star Wars where DV says, "Luke, I am your father". I saw that coming.

Tracing his fingers over the line of the other man's shoulder, Toh leaned over and whispered in his ear, "You will leave Fei Long and come to me."

I didn't see that coming. I really didn't!

Checkmate!

You'r e Killing Me...

[mangagirl1]

Girl, you're giving me diabetes. I have had a major overdose of romance for today just from reading your stories. If I read anymore I will go into sugar shock and coma.

[jamie310]

It's chaos(^^)
wonderful chapter