[Fic] Heavenly Win Part II (end)

[kajornwan]

Because everyone was so nice to spoil me with such a great birthday, a little pay back for those who have been waiting and wondering if I will ever finish this dirty fic. It's very short by my standard, but I'm not good with writing smex these days >.< Sorry

Comments

[angel0399]

Oh my!! Yes, I love it!! Quite an interesting turn this story took! Great job sweetie :-)

[kajornwan]

Thank you ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it.

[char_comet]

Thanks for the smut without hurting anyone XDD
I love very much their interacting and really would have liked to see them teasing each other (I mean without leash and chains obviously) in the real manga.
Your writings often make me think how evil has been Ayano Yamane to deny us the right to see them together *sigh*

[kajornwan]

I'm glad you didn't suffer too much from the whip and chain thing. XD But this fic illustrate what I mean when I talk about whip and bondage (my mind doesn't really go beyond this point 'cause I hate real S&M). And I just bleed heavily thinking of sexy Fei with a whip and a vicious grin on his face *drops dead*.

But I too agree YA has been cruel T_T What could be better than seeing Fei get teased or tease someone. *hugs fei*

[c11]

you did a really good job in this one because it's hot and the two of them are very playfull, not hurting each other. I wandered how you could finish the story withour humiliating the very proud Dragon.

[kajornwan]

Thank you, glad you like it. I'll never humiliate Fei, and I struggled more actually to make sure Mik doesn't sound wimpy because of me handing Fei a whip XDDD. Mik has always been my tool to get Fei to laugh, giggle, smile, strip, or wear skin-tight leather and crawl on the hood of a Ferrari *gets shot by Fei*

[kajornwan]

LOL ha ha didn't mean to thank you with this. Your thank you gift will be at the end of Revelation, I promise (if you can survive Mik until then). I bet you'll like my ending. XD

Meanwhile my icon will have to do lol *gets shot*

*hugs*

[thegreymoon]

LOL, I love your sense of humour! This has really been a highlight of my otherwise pretty miserable day... Thanks so much for finishing the story! So, Mik won the game after all! XDDD

I especially have to compliment the first paragraph... it had me laughing so hard, I had to take a pause, before I was able to continue on to read the rest... 'a disgrace to his whole family tree all the way back to ancient China', LOL! Your Mik is too much fun! :)

[kajornwan]

So, Mik won the game after all! XDDD

Well, you never know. We'll have to see who can still walk first in the morning ha ha.

Actually if you think A x A is a comedy, Mik x Fei will be a huge comedy parallel to the main pairing if they ever get together. They both just have too much attitude we'll be laughing our arses off just watching them argue and the sky is the limit as to what Mik will get Fei do/wear in bed. *giggles*