[fIC] Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 9

Jul 11, 2009 18:06

New chapter. Again, sorry for taking so long. But at least it's a long one XD ( Read more... )

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kajornwan July 12 2009, 00:36:29 UTC
you're like Mc Donalds
You said the 'M' word!!!!! *pouts* That makes me gain weight you know? *sobs*

But I'd love to see sims Fei playing the guzheng!!

Sometimes I think Fei is too perfect to have the possibility to be happy.True. And it's probably because he is beautiful, elegant, intelligent, radiant, sensitive creature that he is lonely. In Buddism it's "you're all in this world to pay for your sins in your previous life." So if you're perfect otherwise, your perfection is probably what's going to cause your suffering. I've always thought Fei is cursed with his beauty. He's beautiful enough to draw all sorts of people in, good and bad, but too beautiful for people to get pass it and appreciate who he is inside. I mean if he were ugly Asami probably wouldn't approach him sexually in the first place. *sighs ( ... )

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lisuliah November 14 2018, 22:47:14 UTC
Feilong is really beautiful, he stands out very much, and "the nail that sticks out gets hammered down" (Japanese proverb).
In an additional booklet about Hong Kong, the YA wrote: "After meeting with Asami, Feilong wandered down these streets (Mog Kok) alone, having finally decided to stop obeying his brother for the first time in his life. Walking by himself while lost in thought, Feilong probably stood out like a sore thumb among the bright neon and bustling nightlife".
Feilong has similarities with the main heroine of the Italian film "Malena". Obsession and envy for men and women.

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tradij July 11 2009, 11:58:17 UTC
well... my day was shit so far... until i checked livejournal and found out that you updated!!! *o* your story is so interesting and i always enjoy reading it soo much... even though my heart aches everytime.

Mikhail and Fei Long just have to be together... T__T please write a happy end, please, please, please!!!

lol about the guzheng... it was rather strange because when i started reading the chapter i was listening to an old guzheng cd i bought back in China which i havent listened to in ages... and suddenly there was Fei playing the guzheng... i was like... huuuuuu???? strange coincidence. one could consider it as FATE xDDDD

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kajornwan July 12 2009, 00:40:52 UTC
Thank you so much for your kind comment. I've wanted to drop it many times because of the stuff in real life and because everyone seem to have dropped out of the fandom these days. But knowing that there are those who still want to read keeps me going. So thank you for letting me know. I truly appreciate it ^__^

Heh? what a coincidence on the guzheng thing! Fate indeed!!!!

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tradij July 12 2009, 18:00:05 UTC
??? omg, please dont drop it, that would kill me, seriously. when i discovered it i read it in one go because i just couldnt stop and im hoping for you to update every day since...
Its such an amazing story and one just has to love your characters. One of the best viewfinder fics ive come across in a long time.
It really would be a shame if you dropped it. So as long as you have time and energy, please continue to share your awesome writing with us!
Its also truly appreciated! ^^

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kajornwan July 13 2009, 04:45:22 UTC
Thank you *hugs* I shall try. Though I too have promised myself to finish it. So I will whether or not I post. As long as there are readers around I'll post ^__^ Thank you so much for the support.

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gesperes July 11 2009, 13:45:14 UTC
Well, the plot is quite ineresting.
But Feodora - is quite unusual name for russian woman. bulgarian or romanian - may be, but not russian. Or she is at least 60 years old.

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kajornwan July 12 2009, 00:46:59 UTC
LOL Yeah, I've messed that up somehow. I've been approached on that subject once before and I was gonna change it. But I think it's a bit too late because I've been calling her that for 30 chapters in two years ^^! But I suppose many people have strange names not of their country's origin, no? Both my kids do ^^! *is such a weird mom* I still love the sound of that name though ^__^ Thank you for pointing it out.

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gesperes July 12 2009, 13:47:07 UTC
For the 30th chapter it's really to late. :)

But I'd like to point that Feodora as a name was mainly used before Revolution, when name for a child was selected using Sviatsy (List of all saints. I suppose, there are some traditions of that kind in Tailand, aren't they?). And for russians nowdays that name sound quite strange (as names like Lenenina or Dazdraperma :)).

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kajornwan July 13 2009, 04:56:37 UTC
XD It is. It feels weird to me to call her with any other name T_T Ahh, but now I get what you mean. It's an old and out-of-date name. But no, there aren't traditions like that in Thailand that I know of. Although some names, too, haven't been used for soooo long here that sometimes it became cool to name your child that way. Sometimes you use an inappropriate word for a name. You know, like 'Apple'? My son's Thai name is Asawin which means 'knight'. It's a word you don't use as names but only use to speak. But now it's kind of strange/cool. And then, you know, Fei Long is also a name Chinese people don't use because it's not a name but a word ^^! The word Long for dragon is also very out of date to be used in a name as well and you'd see it more for characters in old Chinese movies where they were still using swords and flying from tree to tree LOL. Anyway, it was unfortunate that I didn't have a lot of Russian on my f-list that time I gave her that name who can help me decide for a better one ( ... )

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keleosnoonna July 11 2009, 13:55:36 UTC
Awesome!!
I can totally see Feilong playing the guzheng and seducing various men while at it XD
Lovely chapter dear, I'm glad Fei decided to give Mik a chance (God bless Akihito, for once!) ♥

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kajornwan July 12 2009, 00:52:07 UTC
I think everyone should go blind seeing Fei play the guzheng XD The picture is too perfect in my mind.

And LOL god bless Akihito indeed. I've always thought that was on great quality of the boy but that has never been put to good use in the manga. If Fei is to go soft over Aki it should be over seeing that spirit not over Aki's oh so innocent tears. *shudders*

Thank you for continuing to read. I thought everyone has dropped out of the fandom *hugs you* (But really, lately, don't you think there's just the same old handful of us circling Fei these days?)

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c11 July 11 2009, 20:45:09 UTC
I like the way you're developping your plot and the relationship between the characters, especially the honesty of Mikhaïl and, for once, the behavior of his younger brother. Fei Long is perfect as ever! I love the idea of him playing soothing music.

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kajornwan July 12 2009, 00:56:13 UTC
I'm glad you like where it's going. I was really worried it's going to seem soo boring (maybe it is) because I take too much time developing them and never moving them anywhere, on top of it I'm following the manga so that's double boring. *sighs* Oh well, I enjoyed writing it and if there's a few people who still enjoy it I suppose it's enough ^__^ *hugs* I love him playing the guzheng so much too. Thank you for still being around.

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nekomurasaki July 12 2009, 02:02:29 UTC
Awesome work as usual! I have been working 3 weeks straight and this is just what I need to get me out of my "zombie" state! I love Mik and Fei - can't wait to see them back together...

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kajornwan July 13 2009, 05:00:59 UTC
Thank you *tears in eyes* I'm glad it helps you with your day. It helps me too to see that people are still reading. Thank you for your comment. ^_^ I will try to update soon.

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