[fIC] Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 9

Jul 11, 2009 18:06

New chapter. Again, sorry for taking so long. But at least it's a long one XD ( Read more... )

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angel0399 July 12 2009, 02:05:04 UTC
Yay a new chapter!! When I woke up this morning and saw that you updated, it was the 1st thing I read before I got ready for work.

Very interesting turn of events. I was sure mean-ass Yuri did something but that?? Aww poor Misha! But I did cheer for him for a minute when I read that he saved Alexei. This was a heavy chapter, it must have been mental torture to write. I know you're on a diet but here's a treat for you *offers strawberry ice cream (yum!)*

I can't wait for the next chapter! *goes and sits patiently*

Sometimes I think Fei is too perfect to have the possibility to be happy.
You can't have everything in your life, and if you happen to be the more beautiful, elegant, intelligent, radiant, sensitive creature in the world, well... I think your cross ( we in Italy say that everyone, big or little that it could be, has his own cross to bear..) must have to be the loneliness.

Silke, I can understand why you felt that. I'm kinda going through that now (not that I think I'm perfect, far from it, lol) but I'm such a CareBear ( ... )

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angel0399 July 12 2009, 02:11:34 UTC
P.S. Did not mean to make all that bold above, lol! Still tryna get the hang of this whole html code thing.

But anyways, you thought people would drop this fandom? Are you kidding?? It's too good, I know I won't drop this *big smile*

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angel0399 July 12 2009, 19:37:06 UTC
Oh I agree :-)

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anonymous July 12 2009, 22:05:01 UTC
http://s49.radikal.ru/i123/0907/dd/6cb6e6215bc5.jpg

Кajornwan, this is for you. Little Fei and Misha. The best friends in the childhood.

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kajornwan July 13 2009, 04:42:55 UTC
OMFG I have to post this in my lj. *dies* It's toooo cute. Can I? Thank you so so so so much!!!

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anonymous July 13 2009, 07:35:03 UTC
Of course you can! I`m glad you like it. :)

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hirata30 July 13 2009, 12:36:15 UTC
I'm sorry that I never comment your writings (though I always read them) because my english is very weak. I'm a big Fei&Misha-fan and you are my only hope. I like your stories, especially the Cruel Intentions series, but I cherish the One Shot Fillers also, these are so heart-warming (my favorites are Fever and Love). So much Fei&Misha story on one place, it's a real paradise for me.
This chapter struck on my heart too (poor small Misha) I wait for the continuation very much.

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kajornwan July 13 2009, 14:03:26 UTC
Thank you for taking time to comment. I really appreciate it. Never worry about English, I'm Thai and English isn't my first language either. And I'm a very open person so feel free to write or ask or attack me at will LOL I love making new friends in lj. I will try to finish something soon.

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char_comet July 13 2009, 16:46:57 UTC
Thank you for the new chapter. I can imagine it wasn't easy to write of it.
May I ask why Mikhail has suddenly decided to let Feodora go? I doesn't seem to me that the situation is changed compared to what it was before: Mikhail still thinks he cannot live with Fei or am I wrong?

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kajornwan July 14 2009, 05:02:49 UTC
It is my fault that I didn't take time to explain his thoughts more. But a lot has changed, because, even though he still thinks he can't live with Fei, now he has to straighten out a much bigger mess than he has anticipated that will occupy 100% of his time. Meaning he will not go back to Russia for a long time. But he does feel guilty about keeping her waiting although he can't afford to have anything else on his mind right now but the issues regarding Fei. It is a brutal and selfish request from him, really. In a way, he's saying "I'm feeling guilty about you and I want to get rid of you because I don't want to have to deal with anything else right now." Besides, daddy has just broken the promise. He didn't let Feodora go because of Fei. He let her go because she was a burden he can't carry considering the circumstances, even though she doesn't act like one. And I wanted to write this side of Mikhail, too ^_^ Thank you for continuing to read.

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hsyang July 13 2009, 19:31:28 UTC
To paraphrase Feodora -- Must you insist on making me fall in love with these characters all over again every time I read your writing? Seriously, what you've done for this fandom is inspiring ( ... )

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kajornwan July 14 2009, 07:12:32 UTC
It's so sweet of you ^____^ I agree, I really love that contrast in Fei. And I think one of the greatest strength he has is his ability to take his problems and try his best to solve it. I mean with others it's like:

Asami: I don't waste time solving problems. Problems must be eliminated immediately. Anyone has a problem, kill them. (or let them rot in jail or drown in it for 7 years, it's their problem, not mine) *smirks* <------ bully

Aki: Problem? What problem? I've been raped and abuse but, no, I don't have problems *eats pocky* <------- the nerd who got bullied and continues to be a nerd

Mikhail: Oh ho ho ho ho look at this problem!! This looks like fun! I can't wait to see what'll happen if i do this *pokes his hand in it* <-------- that naughty kid on detention, again.

Yoh: I have a problem doing what I have to do, but I have to do what I've promised to do even though it might give everyone a problem. If it's turns out badly I can always die later and I'll get fangirls *yay* <---------- that depressing kid at the back of ( ... )

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hsyang July 14 2009, 17:02:32 UTC
*cracks up like crazy* Those comparisons are too perfect! Wonder if you're planning on doing an AU school crack fic now...

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