[fiC] Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 10

Oct 03, 2009 18:28

I disappeared for like two months >.< Sorry T_T But at long last I'm done with chapter 10 (and 5 pages into 11 *yay*). If baby doesn't get sick again it should be ready soon (if anyone's still reading, that is XD ( Read more... )

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keleosnoonna October 3 2009, 13:00:49 UTC
YESSS FINALLY!!!

Delicious sex scene darling! (I had to say that first!) I love how passionate they both are (and I'm not just talking about the sex this time ^__^ )

Loved it!

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kajornwan October 5 2009, 04:40:58 UTC
XD Thank you. HAven't written smex for soooo long I feel kind of embarrassed >.< Glad it didn't come out lame. *hugs*

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- narcx006 October 3 2009, 13:51:40 UTC
Mmmm. Delicious:) I really like your stories.

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Re: - kajornwan October 5 2009, 04:41:30 UTC
Thank you ^__^ Glad you enjoyed it.

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char_comet October 3 2009, 14:33:40 UTC
Thanks for the beautiful and long new chapter. Maybe you update not so frequently but at least your chapters are long ^__^
It seems to me that it's been ages since I read of some Fei Long/Mikhail lovemaking *crying*
In this hard time that I am having this is a lovely thing to enjoy. Well I know they were not so lovely in their sex and at first I wasn't liking the things how they were heading but...ehy - I don't believe it - then you made Mikhail fall backwards because of a Fei's knee and even to groan and moan.......now I can die happy!XDDD
Did you do it to shut me up and don't hear me to bother you anymore?
Anyway, thanks for it even if know you didn't do it for making me happy ^__^

P.S. Thanks also for making Mikhail to wear terry clothes XDDDD

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kajornwan October 5 2009, 04:51:20 UTC
It seems to me that it's been ages since I read of some Fei Long/Mikhail lovemaking *crying*

It's been ages for me too (and still going because I didn't read this I wrote this *sobs miserably*)

But I'm very glad you enjoyed it. I was kind of worried having made it quite brutal. But you did have a hand in Fei beating up Mikhail XD a part of it was my inability to tolerate cheating in a relationship, meaning if Mik really did cheat on Fei he's got more coming to him than a knee and you can bet on it. Seriously, I'll have Fei cut off his balls and shove them down his throat. LOL But thank you and glad you can enjoy some chapters at least ^_^

P.S. Love Mik in terry robe - he must be so cuddly.

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kajornwan October 5 2009, 05:03:14 UTC
Ehi, do you know thta I'm really interested in Fei's bro?

O_O! Now you're one of a kind. XD But I like Phillip Toh too. He's such a vindictive bitch trying so hard to be like Fei.

And that's a huge step for you to be able to read this chapter without feeling like throwing some thing at me XD I think it's the uke Fei barrier. You've broken it with Valerio *hu hu*

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c11 October 3 2009, 15:39:27 UTC
Oh my dear you made a really good work worthing the wait. This chapter is addictive and the characters credible: Fei Long broken from the pictures send by Toh (as horrible as hie father), Mikhael clever but also in rage... Hope baby's health will let you time to write another chapter intense like this one (poor Ashley has had more than his part of pain).

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kajornwan October 5 2009, 05:06:42 UTC
Thank you *___* I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was so hard after a series of baby getting sick for me to get in the mood to write and I was so worried about it coming out lame.

Oh I love how evil Toh is XD *gets shot* I'm almost done with the next chapter (which really doesn't get anywhere T_T). Just want to get it down before something unfortunate happens a kill my writing mood again. ^__^

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