[fic] Paradise Day 4

Jun 16, 2010 23:23

So sorry for the looong delay. It amazes me how between opening a new branch and starting one more company on top of raising kids and dogs, I still have time to write anything. But it turns out I simply need a little Mik x Fei too! Well, here it is ( Read more... )

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nekomurasaki June 16 2010, 16:46:18 UTC
Yay!!!! Finally a new chapter >_< Thank you so much for ending my mik X fay withdrawals!!!! You have made my day >_<

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baby_fei June 17 2010, 01:42:28 UTC
Finally ^^! I hope you liked it. I'm working on Revelation but not sure if it will ever be finished. Only have 5-10 mins a day T_T

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angel0399 June 16 2010, 17:04:34 UTC
I'm so happy I could help out! *does happy dance*

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baby_fei June 17 2010, 01:46:25 UTC
Thank you so much. I love what you added here and there. And I hope you don't mind where I opted to throw something back in where I feel I just had to ^^! I hope that wasn't too agonizing a job,

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angel0399 June 17 2010, 01:52:04 UTC
Not at all! It's your story, I'm just the checker ^_^

I was stuck on my own story and needed a welcome distraction, so that fates just happen to align. I'm really tryna picture Mikhail stripping...

*thinks*

*faints*

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kajornwan June 17 2010, 13:28:49 UTC
You're stuck on your Mik x Fei? OMG you're writing!! *jumps up and down* Yay to someone who's trying to cure my Mik x Fei withdrawal! You and I should just get together and write a fic! XD

*faints too at the image of Mik in tight jeans stripping .......*

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baby_fei June 17 2010, 01:48:47 UTC
Even though it kills you every time? o_O XD But I need yours as well! Why the hell am I the only one writing Fei these days? I don't even have time! T_T

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angel0399 June 17 2010, 01:53:23 UTC
Hey, hey! I'm working on something! *cries*

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kajornwan June 17 2010, 13:29:22 UTC
*kiss you a thousand times*

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cla_mara June 16 2010, 20:27:21 UTC
LOL
I love a playful Feilong!
Seriously my imagination is running wild with the last statement... ;)

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baby_fei June 17 2010, 01:50:36 UTC
Seriously my imagination is running wild with the last statement... ;)
...mine too actually. But I think Fei needs some fun in life lol *me want to watch too*

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char_comet June 17 2010, 05:50:20 UTC
I liked their interacting very much and Fei Long's final "gimmick" of Michail stripping was really amusing...I'll take a seat near Fei to watch ^_-

P.S. About Yellow Lamborghini, I found out a couple of days ago at Ayano Yamane's blog here that she knows very well how a Yellow Lamborghini looks since she talks of that new Canon digital camera in the photo telling (more or less...) that she was told that its colour was "Yellow Lamborghini" and that there was also a "Red Ferrari" camera
ランボルギーニ Lamborghini
ランボルギーニの黄色 [黄色 yellow の of ランボルギーニ Lamborghini]

フェラーリ Ferrari
フェラーリの赤 [赤 red の of フェラーリ Ferrari]

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kajornwan June 17 2010, 13:33:35 UTC
*sits down with you to share popcorn* XD I'm glad you enjoyed it. I know it was kinda crappy but I needed a break to imagine these two being pampered so I get pampered too in a way lol Do you think Fei will buy Mik for the night? *hu hu*

P.S. OMG that camera IS Lamborghini Yellow! *drools* And she picked Lamborghini! I should manip Mik x Fei with one and send it to her XD Thanks for poking me with this!

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char_comet June 17 2010, 18:25:43 UTC
Thinking back about it (yes I know this story is made to be taken lightly, but just to discuss the subject related to Mikhail and Fei Long, do you mind if we take the cue from the fic and talk of this?)... I'd never have thought to "offer" my lover's stripping in front of other people because I'd be crazy for jealousy. Mikhail would not have done it too ("offering" Fei's strip), I am sure of it, so you think that Fei is so different that, on the contrary, can enjoy to share the view of his lover's naked body with others (claiming, though, that he is the only one who can touch it)?
And, more seriously speaking, don't you think that Mikhail, even if he's a so open-minded guy, without any shame, could feel not at ease at stripping in front of people because of his scars? Not because they are something to be ashamed of, but because they are signs od something that hurt him. Same for Fei Long...if he had thought that a strip by Mikhail meant that his scars would be exposed for everyone to notice them, wouldn't he feel bad for Mikhail?

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angel0399 June 17 2010, 19:44:36 UTC
Hmm...interesting point. I never thought of that. But I'm sure he'll think of some way to deal with it. And he'll enjoy teasing the other people in the room, but he's really enticing his dragon.

I also think Fei could sit there, marveling in the way everyone wants Mikhail, but he's the only one who has him ^_^

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