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kajornwan

[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 13

Jul 12, 2010 21:19

Six months without an update.. I should be slaughtered. But I'm back, and I hope to be able to update faster now that muse is back otherwise it'll take a decade to finish this fic ^^!. To make up for it, here's the longest chapter I've ever written. ^_ ( Read more... )

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jamie310 July 12 2010, 22:50:11 UTC

Really awesome chapter*^&^

kajornwan July 13 2010, 03:34:39 UTC

Thank you ^_^ I'm glad to hear you enjoyed it.

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kajornwan July 14 2010, 02:23:53 UTC

Thank you for letting me know you loved it. I only hope I can write what want to ^^! Will try to speed up the next chappie.

sephbuttons July 17 2010, 04:36:32 UTC

omg! you brought me to tears.
This was beautiful, angsty, and so sad. There were some serious tears on this end, I tell ya.

I love this story. I think I am ready to start reading from the very beginning, especially after reading this chapter. It seems like a good time to re-visit the happier times for mikfey :D

I am also ver glad you are back and I really hope and urge you to continue writing this masterpiece :)
*hugs*

kajornwan July 19 2010, 02:28:45 UTC

omg! you brought me to tears.
Yay *gets shot* I'm just glad that I was able to put in words what I imagine in my head. Thank you for letting me know you like the story and the couple *hugs Mik x Fei* I've started writing the next chapter but with limited time I'm not sure when it'll get done T_T Thanks for stopping by and dropping comments. *hugs*

darielwildfire July 22 2010, 05:29:25 UTC

You certainly manage to give a different take on Naked Truth. I think I like yours a bit more coz it would explain why Misha wanted to interfer in the first place. Cant wait for your chapter on the exchange and Asami x Aki reunion. and possibly more Mik x Fei! Love.

kajornwan July 31 2010, 00:35:35 UTC

Sorry to reply so late. I've been really busy. ^^! But i just want to let you that I'm really glad to hear your thoughts and that you enjoyed it. A x A will have a revelation of their own in this too even though I might not be writing much about their reunion because the manga has already done that. Mik x Fei love, however, will most likely be Mik x Fei hurt for a while until Fei truly realizes himself T_T Thank you for stopping by to comment. I'll try to clear up work to continue as soon as I can. ^_^

char_comet July 22 2010, 23:17:34 UTC

I don't think it was needed at all the rape and not even some violence for them to come to confront each other. All they had to do was to see in each other eyes. So Fei Long didn't need to be raped to realize how much Mikhail was in pain, like actually it happened when he pointed the gun and looked into his eyes. Now I beg you to not try to convince me to the contrary because I won't change my opinion. Perhaps your aim was to get a strong/shocking scene in order to show the strain and the pain and this is the best way to get it, while I don't! I think that it was possible to give their confrontation scene the same power avoiding rape and violence ( ... )

kajornwan July 31 2010, 01:20:15 UTC

Here I am XD I'm not done with work or got my macbook back yet but I just found time to sit down before I got to work. *hugs ( ... )