[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 13

[kajornwan]

Six months without an update.. I should be slaughtered. But I'm back, and I hope to be able to update faster now that muse is back otherwise it'll take a decade to finish this fic ^^!. To make up for it, here's the longest chapter I've ever written. ^_

Comments

[mizuki001]

Take this *throw pillows*. How could you make Fei lies to Mikhail and possibly had been playing him this whole time. I don't like this manipulated Fei character. He is so cruel and calculated.

Noooo...Fei Fei x Misha love forever *hoping and praying*

I do understand that it is essential for Fei x Mikhail to go thru this heartache. I wonder if Fei is testing Mikhail on how genuine and deep his love is. I mean people that love him are the only ones he keeps around...though, he himself has never shown that he receprocates their loves.

As always, I thank you for your work. I am extremely impress by how you stay true to the plot of VF while developing your CI plot. I am on the edge of my sit waiting for your next chapter development. I am re-reading VF to see if I could somewhat get a glimpse of where your story might lead.

[kajornwan]

*ouch* XD Naaa Fei isn't manipulative. He just doesn't know what he wants after all this time. And remember, he has never admitted he loves Mikhail, I think he fears love too much. Fei has always said he had nothing to give, but the thing is, Mikhail knows this, but chooses to stay anyway. So in a way, their relationship has been heading towards this point from the beginning. And it will be like th is, until Fei realizes what he has and what he's about to lose. Which is hard for him considering his past trauma and experience with Asami *hugs Fei*

But I'm totally with you, Mik x Fei forever!! *yay*

Thanks for stopping by and letting me know you're enjoying it. I can't wait to write the new chapter either but work isn't being kind T_T *hugs*

[juicybo0]

omg this chapter killed me T______T
fei SERIOUSLY has some MAJOR making up to do towards misha :(
poor misha... he's the victim amongst all that mess.
his relationship with fei just keeps getting more and more confusing...
supposedly fei already admitted to himself that hes in love with misha but all this mess ugh jsdhjhlejgh and his stupid infatuation with asami... stupidstupidstupid :(
there needs to be more scene with fei being the victim instead! be jealous more fei! lols. his period of time being jealous was wayyyy to short. again, poor mish

[juicybo0]

ps: i dont think i would really mind if this fic didnt end in the typical fei x misha... because fei is SO STUPID in this fic T_____T stupid fei! stop hurting misha! ugh sjklfhldkfjgh... poor misha... he should go back to his fiance who really loves him... unlike fei who keeps betraying him and whos feelings towards him keep changing... sigh

[juicybo0]

a gone with the wind ending would kinda fit...haaa...just saying. :P my heart BLEEDS for misha!!

[kajornwan]

Gone with the wind ending? hmmmm I'm afraid the ending might be more severe, but that depends on which version you'd pick to read. I intend to have two ^_^

[butterflysb]

it is really a great fic . There is not mcuh fic about Mikhail x Fei in baidu china, I would highly recommend all Fei's fans to come here and enjoy your great fic. Thanks ^0^

[kajornwan]

Thank you. I'm glad you like it. It's great to hear from a Chinese Fei fan. I bet there are a lot of his fans over there!

[butterflysb]

Kajornwan sama , thank for your reply ^0^ . To be honest , the love story of Asa X Aki is as simple as other BL stories, then many people find another charming character in Finder, Fei sama is charming & gorgeous enough to let us discover him as well. There are thousands and thousands to be his fans to chase Finder in China. For me , I am amusing and never forget his gorgeous face after reading "Gorgeous Tower" and want to understand him well. Unfortunately he is not hot in Japan and we are afraid he won't appear in future comic. It is hopeful you continue to write the fic to solve our thirsty . ^0

[kajornwan]

As a fellow Fei fan I'm always happy to hear that there are more of his fans out there who aren't happy about his disappearance from VF. As you said, he's not popular in Japan T_T and A x A stories come first which is such a shame. Hopefully we can pester YA enough to write him again. We're doing all we can.

About the fic, I would be honored to have it translated into Chinese. CI has already been translated into Russian and it would be wonderful to see it in Fei's mother language. I wish nothing more than to see Fei fans around the world continue loving him. If that happens, please send me a link to the Chinese version so I can link from my journal as well. ^_^

I'm really glad to hear people are talking about Fei somewhere else on earth. *cheers* And you can call me Faye for short ^_^

[butterflysb]

I post your translated fic to baidu at below link

http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=891236518

you are welcome to visit our pub

All Fei's fans are very happy and excited to hear the new fic about Fei.

In the translation , I am not sure the meanings of "WHEEL" . I know you will use WHEEL to express some
strong emotion sometimes for their love story in bed.

is WHEEL a special meaning for ? ^0^

Below :

<<<<"You may find that I'm not easily pleased." He laughed at the remark. "And I'm usually the one who takes the wheel." He realized he was being a bit flirtatious, but Mikhail wasn't the only one who knew how to hunt.>>>>>

>>AND I'M USUALLY THE ONE WHO TAKES THE WHEEL<<
I may not translate well .

Translate into Chinese as
<<

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for sending me the link. Gosh I wish I can read Chinese. Will everything be posted on this link from now or do I need to include a different link for each part in my journal. Just want to link to you too.

As for "taking the wheel", in English it refers to the the one driving the car, meaning the one in control. Your translation is fine too, because here Fei is saying, "I'm usually the seme in bed".

I soo need to find time to write the new chapter. I really want to *sobs* Thanks again for helping me spread the Mik x Fei love.