[fic] cruel intentions - revelation chapter 13

Jul 12, 2010 21:19

Six months without an update.. I should be slaughtered. But I'm back, and I hope to be able to update faster now that muse is back otherwise it'll take a decade to finish this fic ^^!. To make up for it, here's the longest chapter I've ever written. ^_ ( Read more... )

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butterflysb September 19 2010, 04:11:26 UTC
no, every fic will be posted in different link in baidu as we do it in practice. I will tell you the update

the above link is for the translated "February First" as I like it very much to make it first. And I love Macau very much when I am free sometimes will get there for one or two days. I am living in Hong Kong and 100% of made in HK , then can understand what Fei sama says in Cantonese, ^0^

You seems like driving very much...to get SEDAN & ROADSTER to express the powerful of Mik , is it ? It is quite nice feeling to Mik. I like it...

We got a Dojin writer in our pub slightly like you, so why we are excited to read your fic. ^0^

see you ... have a nice weekend !

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kajornwan September 19 2010, 09:29:09 UTC
Oh you live in Hong Kong! I adore Macau. I wrote that piece right after I'd returned from a Hong Kong/Macau trip. I saw a red Ferrari parked on a shopping street and immediately thought "hmm what's Mikhail doing in HK" ha ha. And even though Hong Kong isn't quite my thing (I'm not so much into big cities), I looooove the food XD Next time I'm there you'll have to list me great Chinese restaurants ^_^

Actually I hate driving with a passion. Meaning unless it's necessary I won't drive and I like to be driven. But I do love aggressive sports cars. Hot men driving hot cars is....well, hot!

Are there a lot of Fei fics in Chinese too? I sooo want to read some *cries*. Nobody writes Fei these days in English. It's so sad.

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butterflysb September 19 2010, 15:37:23 UTC
there isn't much dojin about Fei in our pub and some of them still isn't completed , I get the completed one for you and they are good enough.

http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=722370860
Asa x Fei ,the story when Fei was 17 and went to Tokyo himself

http://bbs.jjwxc.net/showmsg.php?board=36&id=2514&msg
Vincent X Fei , writer doesn't like Mik then create a interesting guy

http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=359381020
Chan X Fei , about his special friend

http://tieba.baidu.com/f?kz=560801223
our pub manager likes to make this TOPICS, it is very funny

hope you enjoy it ^0^

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shiranui22 January 29 2011, 21:20:45 UTC
I know you did write this some time ago and I know I'm yet again late to comment it.. but I have to tell you.. well, how good it was. I think this is one, if not THE best chapter so far.. at least in my opinion ( ... )

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kajornwan January 30 2011, 01:15:44 UTC
Thank you very much for stopping by to let me know how much you like the chapter. I sure pictured the scenes very clearly, down to the last raise of Mikhail's brow, but I always feel my writing skills don't do my imagination justice ^^! So I'm very glad that at least you do feel with them as I did when I imagined it. The rape may not be totally necessary or expected, but I wanted to show that turmoil in Mikhail's heart. He doesn't just love Fei, but he loves Fei too much for his own good.

Again thank you for your kind comments. It is hard to find fanfics on them. I'm glad you love them too.

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lalolalola March 5 2017, 20:19:55 UTC
I'm very disappointed with Fei in this chapter. I gotta say you truly shocked me when I realised what he'd done with Asami in that room. I was reading this in bed and I gasped out loud haha.. I understand he still has feelings for Asami, but it was ...pathetic? of him to put himself out there to Asami, degrading himself once again for the man who thinks so low. I understand why he kissed him and said "I just wanted to make you mine" in canon, but now he had Mik he should have been past that. Even in the canon it was a little left field too, but I think it was mainly for fanservice, the kiss ( ... )

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