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[fIC] Cruel Intentions - Revelation Chapter 14

Nov 20, 2010 07:23

Title: Revelation Chapter 14
Rating: PG
Warning: Complete angst
Characters: Mikhail, Fei Long, Yoh
Spoiler: Huge spoiler for everything in NT.
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Notes: Thank you angel0399 for the great beta job and I’m sorry for having burdened you with two lengthy fics at a time.

( Revelation 14 )

Comments 63

harmien November 20 2010, 01:06:24 UTC

omg more dont end it pls *begs*
this chapter was awesome i hope u continue ^^

kajornwan November 22 2010, 04:40:29 UTC

Thank you for stopping by. I do have a huge plot for later, but just want to see if you guys still want me to drag it along ^_^

sliad November 20 2010, 05:12:58 UTC

Two weeks ago, I began to read this fiction, spent two weeks to finish this wonderful story created since 14 May 2007, pls not end here, complete it a perfect sequel for this couple, no matter whether it will take another three years. :)

kajornwan November 22 2010, 04:41:55 UTC

I'm very flattered that you are enjoying it. Gosh, has it been that long? Almost four years and I didn't realize it. I'm not sure if it will be perfect. But I shall try. Thank you so much for stopping by ^_^

angel0399 November 20 2010, 05:56:03 UTC

*hugs Misha* You always have me deary!! Once again, awesome chapter =) And it's so cool that Mik and Yoh were able to see eye to eye.

kajornwan November 22 2010, 04:43:32 UTC

You always have me deary!!

Oii, move over, woman. I'm next in line!! *gets shot*

I enjoyed the Mik and Yoh encounter a lot. And I have big plans for them to work side by side in the future, including some good wresting between the two *hu hu*

angel0399 November 22 2010, 16:51:06 UTC

Wait... wrestling? *thinks about half naked bishies covered in sweat and muscles, gripping each other...*

*faints*

sliad November 29 2010, 01:50:51 UTC

hia hia~~ I like seeing these two dithery pursuers inspire eachother~~

sarcastic666 November 20 2010, 06:04:10 UTC

Personally, I like this ending. It's very suiting to their characters and doesn't contradict the original plot line. *shrugs* What can I say? I dig angsty endings. But feel free to kick out another resolution arc if your inner muse says to treck on.

kajornwan November 22 2010, 04:47:44 UTC

You're very right about it being suiting to their characters. I feel that too. Except this angsty ending isn't half of what I had in mind if I continue. *ebil laugh* My muse has given me a plot to last 5 more years :D I'm just not sure I should act on it and suffer my readers LOL But thank you very much for the input and for stopping by to comment. I truly appreciate it.

saiyuki_win November 20 2010, 08:28:08 UTC

Noooooo!!! Don't end here!! I mean.. it does make sense.. but but D:!

I cannot imagine Fei alone without Yoh and Mik.. Granted he does still have Tao.. but D: Maybe until Tao grows up, Fei could get himself a golden retriever or something o_o

Things are hot when he's with Alexei, but noooo~ Mik x Fei!!!

Nooooooo~ too angsty!
What happened to going 'home'?

*incoherent*

kajornwan November 22 2010, 04:52:44 UTC

XD Well, I could continue, but I can't guarantee Fei will have Yoh or Mik or both, who will die, who will live etc.. Tao I'm sure will grow out of Fei and leaves his ass one day (baby boys always do T_T). A golden, retriever, however, will always be there....for about 14 years .....

You know, I have this urge to have Fei cheat on Misha with Alexei constantly. And I do mean constantly!!! I have been restraining myself over this for years!! LOL Gosh, think of all the suffering that will blow up.... *is insane*

saiyuki_win November 24 2010, 17:18:33 UTC

Hahaha i love your reply! Noooooo~ And Tao! How could you!!!

HAHA. Yes i can totally see that in the writing! When you first made Fei cheat. Then again and again! Urgh. You're giving new ideas to my head. Threesome! I mean both of them fighting for Fei in bed *coughs*

Noooooo~ I want moreee~

You are so evil! Tsk! (But I'm sure you know we adore you and your story! =p)

saiyuki_win November 24 2010, 17:25:36 UTC

Okay, but i really cannot imagine Mik going back to Fei.. at least not like how he always does it. He's really much stronger than that..

Unless some of that broken trust could be fixed.

It makes me wonder when will Fei be like Mik in this aspect. This strength. The both of them really contrast each other. They are so different in so many different ways. But they really do complement each other.

Which reminds me...
...you're really going very easy on Asami. (i know he's not the main of the story but... )

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