[fic]Cruel Intentions trilogy: Retribution One

[kajornwan]

I think I should explain myself a little about the situation with Cruel Intentions. I’ve decided to end ‘Revelation’ as it is in Chapter 14 but continue the story, as requested, in a new arc that will conclude CI as a trilogy. The point of Revelation that follows NT plotline from start to finish was to have all the characters come clean with with

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[whatswrongbaby]

*wheeew* well that was a lot to take in for a first chapter! Luckily, the M in me is delighted with the overflowing angst so much so that I had to read this twice before I could have a proper comment. If only for that, I'm already sold to this new arc XD

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for stopping by and take time to comment. It is indeed a proper one and very flattering.

As you said, Fei is on a journey to true happiness, but it's not to get Asami back or even Mikhail back, but to find out what he truly wants, accept it, and find the courage to go for it with no more fear of getting hurt. For now he's still confused about what to do. And Asami is coming back big time, just wait XD Fei deserve to have a true sit-down talk with this guy, once and for all.

We don't need Alexei to make things more messy and complicated T_T
We certainly don't, but Alexei is one important key in this story and in the end, even though I know everyone will hate him, you will thank his existence. Think of Alexei as Fei in VF (where nothing really moves without villain-Fei)

And Mikhail is going down the drain. I'm glad you agree about the drug overdose. Mikhail will more or less be the damsel in distress here LOL *get shot*

Thanks again for stopping by and fangirling over Mik x Fei with me. I miss them so much too.

[youko_slytherin]

ohh... for some reason I hatehatehate feodora o.o nono, I know the reason, being in close range of Mikhail makes me hate her xD But I luuuuuv Alexei, he is so... immature ^^ Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter ; . ; and I wouldn't mind reading some Alexei x Fei fanservice here xD As long as everyone knows Fei is Mikhail's =D

[kajornwan]

LOL don't hate Feodora, I put her there so I can hurt her and shoe just how insignificant she is *is evil* and I assure you she'd be better off away from Mikhail. But I too love Alexei *high five*. XD Alexei x Fei fan service? You want me to write a one shot sinful fantasy I had so often wrote and deleted? *hu hu*

[c11]

you did a really great job (but don't forget to have fun during your holidays), and almost make me been late at work (I never open my computer before leaving, I just did this morning and saw your post, couldn't wait to read it). It follows your story line and has the right tone.
thanks for sharing

[kajornwan]

Thank you and sorry for making you almost late for work (teacher late for class from reading yaoi fic LMAO I should be killed!). I'm glad you enjoyed it and I am having fun relaxing in the sun writing ^_^

[nekomurasaki]

Ugh! So much pain Fei!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.... please make the pain go away.

[kajornwan]

ummm..pain can't go away until a few more (or more) chapters ^^! But thank you for stopping by. I'm working on the next one so hopefully it won't be long ^__^

[angel0399]

Fei is a man you do not touch unless you have the guts and dedication to follow through like Mikhail. ^_^

I couldn't agree more =)

I'm so looking forward to where everyone will end up!

[kajornwan]

*high five* Well, we all know what happened to the last man who did (and his uke) *hu hu hu*