[fic]Cruel Intentions trilogy: Retribution One

[kajornwan]

I think I should explain myself a little about the situation with Cruel Intentions. I’ve decided to end ‘Revelation’ as it is in Chapter 14 but continue the story, as requested, in a new arc that will conclude CI as a trilogy. The point of Revelation that follows NT plotline from start to finish was to have all the characters come clean with with

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[kajornwan]

Thank you for your kind comment. I'm glad you liked the way Alexei appeared. I had a lot of fun writing his appearance this time. Alexei x Fei is also my guilty pleasure. ^^!

[raine90]

Hi, here I am, as promised!

Wow, I suffered a lot during this chapter, poor poor Fei! That the penthouse was sold nearly broke my heart, I was confodent that Mikhail would never give it away.I was glad that Alexei appeared though, I think he's a very interesting character.
Although I like this angsty kind of fanfiction, I really hope things will get better soon - for Feilongs sake.
Please continue as soon as possible!

Hugs,
Raine

[kajornwan]

Sorry for my late reply (I thought I had, really @_@). Sorry to suffer you guys and Fei Long, though it's necessary. And I feel worse for Mikhail really, as you will see in the next chapter. He's in a much worse situation in a way. Thanks for stopping by to comment. See you around ^___^

[butterflysb]

Oh, it is great as you continue the story. From head to toe , I believe Fei will go away the mind of ASA and begin new life in manga , it will be same in your story, is it ? As i don't want Fei suffer the hesitant again and again, oh no, it is too poor to make Fei learn the mistake from suffering. I hope this time he finally makes something by following his heart.

Alex seems to be an angel between Mik & Fei to make everything be back. ^0^ I like Alex more and more.

Poor Mik , I hope he will be recover and perk up so please Fei returns to his side very soon.

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I am glad and be honored to assist you some Chinese word. Just PM me if you need some information next time , I will do the best for you. ^0^

[kajornwan]

Sorry for my late reply (I didn't realize I haven't). This is the last time Fei will hesitate, and it's necessary for me to put him through this otherwise he'd not leave anything at all behind and lose everything he holds dear

[butterflysb]

Hi FAYE
TIGER's FANG >>> fang means tooth or a group of people ????

Tiger tooth = HU YA (mandarin)虎牙

if any organization set up in China will using mandarin in common sense.

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Oh... it is great how you send twitter to YA, you know Japanese and her twitter address, well... just give us any information let us to pass a great hope to press her to get back Fei in the comic

[kajornwan]

The suffering began again XDDDDD.
And it shall continue. *ebil laugh*

But you are right about Asami being the only one to undo everything, which is why he is coming back big time. But how,you'll have to wait and see. Because I have it figured out to the T.

My (darling) Yoh (too) is scaling Baishe building wearing a black mask with pointy ears and a cape watching over Fei (and I think he has his own cave funded by Mik LOL). But not to worry, he's coming back big time too. I'm loving him a lot lately.

P.S. *high five on poor wives* I don't know about you, but I'm having one hell of a time suffering Feodora.

[kajornwan]

LOL both because of Fei indeed XD They should live together, these two XD

P.S. I don't want to tell you this because the conversation would just go on and on. But I'm having a great discussion about Yoh and Fei in here (http://delwynmarch.livejournal.com/39304.html?view=435592#t435592). If you haven't read, do, and feel free to jump in. ^_^

[shiro245]

So Fei's journey begin again.
Thank you for continuing your fic.
I just want Fei to find some happiness in life and don't run away from it. It is so heart breaking that after all they went through Mik sold that penthouse.
Hope Fei would fight to get Mik back or he will regret it for the remain of his life.
Can they really be together?

[kajornwan]

Yes ^_^ It begins again, this time something will change.

Hope Fei would fight to get Mik back or he will regret it for the remain of his life.

I certainly hope so and I shall try. And that was the point of the break up really, to make Fei regret and start doing what he should instead of chasing after the past.

Thank you for stopping by and comment. ^__^