[fic] Retribution Four

Jun 25, 2011 16:15

I don't believe my failure....6 months of no update. T_T Really, I'd be amazed if there're still people reading this (please let me know if you still are). But here it is anyway ( Read more... )

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euphory June 25 2011, 18:38:48 UTC
Whenever Yan and Phillip appear together in a chapter, I can't help but hope "why don't you two just get together and spare everyone else??!!"

Anyways, I hope Feilong strikes back hard and vicious. Underestimate him is a huge mistake to make.

He is, after all, the person who single-handedly revitalized Baishe in his early 20s. He's only 28 and already achieved so much (whereas Asami was still a "contractor" when he was 28). He must have a lot abilities to stay in such a position.

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kajornwan June 26 2011, 00:25:19 UTC
Lol, I keep thinking that too XD But they are kind of together in a way.

I'm sure Fei is capable of breathing fire and everyone will burn. But I also believe Fei has emotional problems to overcome before he can win. When daddy died he didn't even try to seek revenge and he wasn't even angry, just sad. Yan is kind of right, Fei's weakness is that he doesn't know what he wants. Until he does, he can't win. I've written this story to lead Fei to his emotional breakthrough, most of all over Asami. So that's going to happen, and then I will need to go learn Kung Fu ASAP to write Fei kicking ass XD

Thank you so much for the comment. It really helps to see that people are still reading. I hope the next chapter will not disappoint.

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euphory June 26 2011, 02:57:18 UTC
Or he can someone (his many subordinates) do the dirty work for him. After all, Fei is a leader!

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kajornwan June 26 2011, 23:39:07 UTC
No no no, I want to see Fei in action XD And I think Fei would want to beat the shit out of Toh with his own hands!!

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bbly June 26 2011, 06:38:00 UTC
I've been checking for an update almost every week since the last chapter up until last month. I got caught up with lots of personal things recently, and my crave for a new chapter was somewhat subsided a little. It was midnight when all of the sudden I thought about Fei Long and your fic.... And it's HERE! Yahoooo...!

I'm not good with words. I hope my persistant stalking at your site is enough to prove how much I love your writing. :-)
Can't wait for the next chapter.

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kajornwan June 26 2011, 23:41:43 UTC
That is so flattering to know you still check regularly for updates when I haven't updated anywhere near regularly. Thank you so much. It gives me the will to wrte more knowing people still love this pairing just as I do. I've also stared chapter six. Hopefully I can finish that quickly too.

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reika_72 June 26 2011, 14:52:40 UTC
I'm so happy to read a new chapter !
read the indifference and the coldness of Mik ... omg I was in agony *sigh*
I'm waiting for the next chapter !
*hugs*

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kajornwan June 26 2011, 23:45:16 UTC
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you're happy and hope that it did not disappoint. The next chapter is being beta-Ed and I've already started six. Hopefully it won't take too long to finish too, but six is the most difficult to write. T_T

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nekomurasaki June 27 2011, 00:52:25 UTC
wow! I can't wait for the next chapter... worth the wait Faye!

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kajornwan June 27 2011, 02:57:54 UTC
Thank you so much. I hope to bring next chapter up soon. But for now, sensei is doing Mik x Fei this issue *screams*

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mizuki001 June 27 2011, 03:05:01 UTC
Waah, Mikhail had lost weight...poor baby. I had missed him so much. I'm digging this hardedge, cold, and cruel Mikhail you depicted. I can't wait to find out what'll happen next. Thank you for your hardwork.

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kajornwan June 27 2011, 07:32:04 UTC
Poor baby indeed. But I do love this cold and scary Mik more and more too. Glad you agree XD Thank you so much for being here and comment. It helps me writer a lot faster and try a lot harder.

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mizuki001 June 28 2011, 08:28:56 UTC
It has always been my pleasure reading your trilogy. I was never into fan fic that is until I was exposed to yours. I love the way you portray MikhailxFei, the problems they encountered, the hardships they must overcome, and especially their comedic interactions. I am so glad to have been exposed to just mesmerizing writing.

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kajornwan June 29 2011, 02:22:43 UTC
You're too kind ^_^ But thank you and I'm really glad I can do something to entertain the Mik x Fei fans.

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