[fic] Retribution Four

Jun 25, 2011 16:15

I don't believe my failure....6 months of no update. T_T Really, I'd be amazed if there're still people reading this (please let me know if you still are). But here it is anyway ( Read more... )

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portisheart June 27 2011, 19:19:46 UTC
awesome. as usual. no way to tell where you'd be going, from your last chapter. and after what Fei Long and Mik had shared in C & R, this hospital scene feels like a brutal and sudden push into cold dark water.. or some empty void, the one Fei Long must be feeling at the rejection, or Mik at the loss. oh master of angst! ~

i like the bit about Toh and Yan too, nice to see all half bros are kickass fighters. and especially as Toh shows Yan who the boss is XD.

thx for this chapter! so enticing, i couldn't resist reading it, and even managed to comment!
a little victory those days when every email, every posted entry and the thought of responding aggravates my momentaneous acute avoidance syndrome..
i still have your (and other) recent entries in my toolbar *head drops*

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kajornwan June 29 2011, 02:20:19 UTC
Thank you. It's so good to see you back online. where is my update? *gets shot* We all missed you.

I kind of want Mik to suffer this time. And Terry may accuse me rightfully of loving Mikhail too much now, because whoever I put through the most agony is the one I love the most XD But the angst is such a joy to write, even though it may come to an end soon.

I hope to have next chapter up soon and hope to see you there too. *hugs & kisses*

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jamie310 June 28 2011, 23:23:55 UTC
Thank you so much for the update*<>*

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kajornwan June 29 2011, 02:20:46 UTC
Thank you so much for still reading this awfully long fic ^_^

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jamie310 June 29 2011, 03:52:31 UTC
Love this awfully long fic story though keep writing *<>*

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kajornwan July 1 2011, 11:17:56 UTC
Hi sweetie. Glad you made it ^_^ Thanks you so much for your kind comment. I only hope I can write as beautifully as you draw. I'm glad you find it cinematic, because I see it as movie scenes (complete with SFX and all XD), and then I write. If only I can draw like you!!!!

Why does Fei only realizes he wants something when that things is escaping 9_9)
That is the thing about Fei, don't you think? He knew he was loved and then daddy died, he was about to give in to Asami and then the man ditched him, and Yoh only told him he loves him after the betrayal. Fei is sort of cursed. I wish sensei realizes this soon T_T

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kajornwan July 1 2011, 11:42:59 UTC
I think his imperfections are what make him so gorgeous to use Fei fans. Sort of like Angelina Jolies' out of proportion lips XD I love that he doesn't know what he wants, but he struggles passionately rather than just put it aside like Aki or step on it and appear all tough and perfect like Asami. Fei feels so deeply, and that tells me he loves passionately too. Mikhail also is such an imperfect character. You never know if he's going to kiss you or steal from you (he probably will kiss you AND then steal from you at the same time anyway XD). The man has no discipline, but that also means he loves with no discipline too ^_____^

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jamie310 July 15 2011, 22:51:08 UTC
Really incredible chapter

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confusion_hime August 5 2011, 09:02:03 UTC
NOOOO! Alexei died! Why? WHY? WHY? *bawls* I'm not really a fan of OC, but Alexei, is different. He's your OC but I feel like he belongs to the original storyline, but now he's... he's.... *runs away crying*

Excellent chapter, btw. *winks then goes back to weeping*

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