[fic]Retribution Six

Jul 26, 2011 08:33

A relatively fast update, and the next one would be faster, since Seven is being beta-ed ( Read more... )

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jamie310 July 26 2011, 04:56:19 UTC
OMG your the best~(*<>*~)

Thank you for the update.

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 00:36:43 UTC
Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.

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anonymous July 26 2011, 06:46:39 UTC
I tired to open an LJ account (without any success at all what-so-ever) just to comment on your masterpiece with CI. I read the entire thing today and since I couldn't get myself a LJ account, I guess I will just have to be Anonymos until the day come when I could open an account with success. There's no word for how good this is....very addicting. I was a huge AsamiXFei fan and now with your fic, your got me completely hooked on MikXFei. The only reason I ever read the original manga at all was for Fei <3 I had this a soft spot in my heart for dearest Fei Long and hoped the best for him ever since his character appeared in the manga. I truely believed Asami loved Fei at one point and still cares for him even now... With that said, I always wanted Asami for Fei, but for a fact I also know that would never happen (due to how this pairing was never what YA had intented). I was disappointed, I must say. And yet with your fic, I feel like there might be someone to be placed by Fei's side after all. Yes...you turned me into a MikXFei fan ( ( ... )

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 00:49:19 UTC
Sorry, I just got Lj back to reply (your comment showed up, I didn't know why it was screened though. Anyway, I unscreened it here ( ... )

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forgottenraine July 29 2011, 04:23:15 UTC
Yay! First thing first. I fianlly got that LJ account I was looking forward to. Except LJ is giving hell with all of its problems (T-T). So I am concluding that it just hates me for some reason. But it won't be stopping me from commenting on your masterpiece so we won't have to worry about that (winks).

It is actually funny how I came across CI. My first encounter with your fan fics was actually a chinese translation of Love (or some other filler I think). It was a pretty good translation but I wanted to read the real thing from start to finish so I followed the original link to here. Believe me, there are A LOT of Chinese fans in love with your MikXFei fics. I started that day feeling kinda upset over not getting the AXF pair I wanted after re-reading the entire manga. So I went and checked out some Chinese AsamiXFei fan fics. There was nothing but out of the thin air there was your translated MikXFei fan fic <3! I didn't feel much love for the pair at the begining, yet in the end you made my day with your MikXFei fic and I have ( ... )

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 06:06:35 UTC
Ohh The Chinese translation! I have to thank butterflysb for this. She did tell me there are a lot of Chinese fans. I'm really sad their voices can't be heard by sensei how popular Fei is over there. There are so little Fei fans in the International comm that we feel rather lonely.

Anyway, you don't have to worry. I've been drowning ppl who love and hate this couple with my fics for 5 years and I shall continue. I wrote an Asami x Fei one shot once though if you like the couple. ^_^ And as i said, don't worry, write away. I made some great friend in lj , one visited me and stayed at my parent's house.. All because of CI!

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c11 July 26 2011, 09:56:57 UTC
thanks for the update and I think the storyline progresses in this chapter because the 2 of the 3 peoples are dealing with their issues. And it is the point of your story, right ?
hope you're well with all your family.

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 00:55:54 UTC
Lj has been down for the last 4 days, how was yours? It works for me this morning and I just got a chance to reply,

You're quite right, it is the point of my story. To me it has progressed a lot, being able to reveal Feodora's thoughts and past. It's necessary for Fei to hear it in order to move both Fei and Feodora toward an understanding between them. You know, the wife and mistress have to confront each other at some point XD I just thought that she's a side character and perhaps not many ppl would want to read about her so this chapter doesn't have a lot of things in it. Anyway, it's great to see you and I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^ my family is well, I hope you are doing fine too. Any trip coming up this year?

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randrews25 July 26 2011, 11:52:25 UTC
I read this chapter, and while I can't comment on the overall story since I haven't read it, I can say you have an awesome writing style. I could feel the anger and the emotions in the story from Feodora and Feilong!

Good work :))

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 01:05:37 UTC
Sorry for the late reply. Lj didn't let me until today.

Lol I was really surprised to see you here (revenge?) Are you one of those rude readers who read from the end to the beginning too? *points Delwynmarch* I'm just joking. XD But thank you for stopping by and letting me know. It's always an honor to have a compliment from a great author! Hopefully you will continue to give us Mik x Fei too ^_^ See you back in your journal? (Meaning I want update, woman!)

Btw, if you're interested in a Mik x Fei fic from a really great writer, I'd totally rec Dire Consequence from my dear friend Alexis thegreymoon. It's angsty but a pure gem and she's a really awesome writer. She's also primarily Asami fans. ^_^

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randrews25 July 29 2011, 01:40:42 UTC
It always gets to me when people call me a, or hint that I'm a great author, cause I don't see it (gets to me in a good way that is ;))
I should be thanking you for the compliment, I really appreciate it <3

I did read Dire consequences and I love it! Everything about that fic is awesome; the plot, characters and story telling is amazing 8D

I'm hoping to update by tomorrow (if lj let's me) with my own fic. I really like how my mikxfei seems to be acceptable by those who like them :))

Stay tuned and thanks^^

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char_comet July 26 2011, 15:56:28 UTC
I am not one of those who hate Feodora and actually have never complained about her, except for her blaming on Fei Long for everything bad happened to Mikhail when it was the russian who harrassed Fei XD
Anyway, though I appreciated her being so bold in front of Fei Long, I found quite disturbing all the things she trew on him about his being coward etc etc in everything he did. This because I got from her the bad feeling that it was you (the author) that thinks of Fei Long like that and put on her mouth your own thoughts =_= Now I know that you think of Fei Long like an insicure guy and that you love him for his lacks too, but I don't think he deserves all those evil words.
The chapter wasn't boring at all and was clearly necessary, but I am going to thank your muse for giving us the nex chapter soon ^__-

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 01:31:45 UTC
As you can see, Lj is being kind today XD ( ... )

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char_comet July 29 2011, 07:13:38 UTC
Ehy, if you find Fei Long to be such a pityful guy like those who hate him do, why do you like him? Only because he's a beautiful long haired guy? Then you cannot complain when I say that I feel you being mostly a Mikhail's fan and only secondly a Fei long's fan: when you talk of Mikhail - I mean not specifically in your fic but in general - you always glorify him for both his handsomeness and his great personality while when talking of Fei Long you compliment him for his beauty....and his insecurity. You like Mikhail for his being determined and Fei for his being insecure?

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 08:04:45 UTC
I don't think Fei is pitiful, those are some ppl's projections I can "understand" but "disagree". I do find him insecure and lost, and if this is what puzzles you why I would like an insecure guy then I have to say these things don't matter to me at all. I don't like Fei for his insecurity, I like Fei mostly for his fire and dedication. Insecure or not Fei follows his heart to the ends of the earth which is why i hate seeing him go soft because of Aki's words. It defeats the whole point of what makes Fei beautiful to me. The Fei I see and love would hunt Asami down until he gets what he wants. Mikhail is exactly the same kind of man, only he's secure. While Asami tends to do things rationally and for profit (which doesn't interest me), and Aki follows the rules of the society and 'Walt Disney's Princess Behavior Guide Book' to the T, Fei and Mikhail follow their heart, no matter how despicable it makes them. Conclusion: I like people who live passionately by their hearts, not their heads. Hence, Mikhail and Fei Long. I don't find Fei ( ... )

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