[fic]Retribution Six

Jul 26, 2011 08:33

A relatively fast update, and the next one would be faster, since Seven is being beta-ed ( Read more... )

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 01:44:32 UTC
Lol she is. I love an evil female villain! It was sort of written to make you say that. I only hope ppl don't hate her because she's boring, but hate her because she's evil XD thanks for stopping by and let me know your thoughts.

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oni_saru July 26 2011, 17:39:22 UTC
Yay! New chapter! ^_^

I don't think this chapter was boring at all. I think it was great to see what Feodora was up to! I don't hate her at all. I kind of admire her character. The fact that she still loves Mik after all the things he puts her through (the sleeping around, etc), is very admirable.

I think this chapter was good in further developing her character and showing what's up in the Arbatov House, setting the background of what must be done to help Mik overcome his current drug problem, and showing Fei taking steps to start fixing his relationship with Mik.

I look forward to the next chapter!

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 01:58:10 UTC
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad you didn't fond it boring.it's always risky to write so much about a side character. But it was necessary to move a lot of things and I'm really happy you saw the point of it. I hope the next chapter will not disappoint as well,

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 02:47:03 UTC
Hi! Sorry, I just got a chance to reply due to Lj being down in the past few days. Good to see you with an account. Have you joined the communities? Your comment did show up and I just replied. ^_^ BTW, may I ask how you found my fic if you're not a member at the comms? I'm just wondering that's all since I didn't post anywhere else. It would be interesting to know,

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delwynmarch July 27 2011, 22:53:24 UTC
You should be careful, because I'm starting to like Feodora better than any other Arbatov ;) Should she and Yoh work together, they could easily swipe Hong Kong and Macau from under Fei Long and Mikhail's feet :P Plus, if they got together romantically, that would neatly tie up all the loose ends and allow Fei and Mik to remorselessly take some endless vacation on some island... Yeah, sounds like an ideal solution to me :P !

*sigh* Of course, knowing you, Feodora is probably gonna die after realising she was wrong about Fei Long and about MikxFei, and Yoh will grow old all on his own, satisfied with just serving as some kind of freelance agent for Baishe and the Arbatov :(

Mah, don't mind me :P I just got into that time of the month, plus RL sucks, and I can't work on my YohxFei like I want, so I'm moody. This chapter was great work as usual, very vivid and emotional, and making me want to know what happens next, so good job :) !

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kajornwan July 29 2011, 02:03:56 UTC
Lol I actually thought of Yoh x Feodora, really, but I thought that would be an insult to Yoh fans, pairing him with a woman. Apparently you at least wouldn't mind? Lol and yes, what a good idea! Leave the organizations to Yoh and Feodora and head off to the Caribbean *yay* happily ever after with a tan!

Feodora is never going to die. I must keep her alive for a really good reason every Mik x Fei fan will thank me for. And Yoh will be alive due to certain future job that would make him so adorable!

I hope RL eases up on you by now. I'm off to read your post since Lj just let me today. Thanks for stopping by, sweetie.

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delwynmarch July 29 2011, 05:01:31 UTC
kajornwan July 29 2011, 05:32:19 UTC
Lol pair the spares. To tell you the truth I never felt the need to do it, it's hard enough pairing my main pair and I do hate it when ppl just get together and head straight to happily ever after (as if there exist one). But since you approve, it might just happen (of course, if Mikhail doesn't drag him to join the Mik x Fei ride first )

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narcx006 July 29 2011, 14:16:15 UTC
I wanted to post a comment much sooner, but LJ didn't allow me to do anything... :(

I hope Feodora lets Fei be there during the procedure (though I know he will be there even if she doesnt allow it...), because the best thing for Mikhail in this state would be Fei being near him. Since we all know the Russian still loves the beautiful Dragon :)

As I read your fiction, I want it more and more that Mik x Fei finally happens in the manga too... I love your stories so much ! ^__^

Thank you for the update!

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kajornwan July 30 2011, 01:26:04 UTC
I know, i couldn't come in to reply either. Good thing it's up again ^_^

Thank you for taking the time to cime back and comment. I truly appreciate it. I sure hope to see them in cannon too. They would be so gorgeous drawn by sensei.

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