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kajornwan

[fic]Retribution Six

Jul 26, 2011 08:33

A relatively fast update, and the next one would be faster, since Seven is being beta-ed ( Read more... )

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Re: finally able to read and comment anonymous July 30 2011, 01:19:38 UTC

Lol i didn't expect you to like her more. I understand there are some things about some people that just doesn't do it for you, me or anyone. But if i have to explain her behavior,Mikhail is a family and whether or not she leaves him as a wife to marry another guy, he will always mean a lot to her, sort of the way Asami will always mean a lot to Fei, no matter how bad he's treating Fei (and that's pretty bad - actually the way he treats Akihito is worse, fuck-cleaning him after he just got raped WTF?). They have a history together that i haven't got time to write and Mikhail had been more than kind as a brother and a friend. I can see her leave him, totally, just not right now when everythng is a mess and her family needs her. But then i also believe she would still risk her new man for the sake of him, the same way i believe Yoh would for Fei should he ever gets married and Fei is in trouble. Feodora knew from the very beginning that he would never love her as a woman, it was never aquestion of leaving him or not, because she'd never ( ... )

Re: finally able to read and comment kajornwan July 30 2011, 01:21:40 UTC

That was me BTW, forgot to login XD

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gizalisas July 31 2011, 11:25:04 UTC

HI ( ... )

kajornwan August 4 2011, 08:40:55 UTC

Hi ^_^ It's good to see you back. I hope things are getting better for you now. My taste for tragedy is rather strong, but at least I've come to the conclusion that I don't want to end it tragically, whereas 2-3 months ago I was planning exactly that. So there's a breath of fresh air for you ^_^ I really didn't have to kill Alexei, but killing him gives me an opportunity to move the plot as you've noticed. I needed this change in role, or else Fei will never realize what he's about to lose. And yes, Fei Long is on the verge of becoming a true dragon outside and in which is the goal of this fic, and therefore this trilogy is about to end soon (but not so soon, maybe 10 more chapters? XD ( ... )

portisheart August 3 2011, 21:51:24 UTC

finally caught up.. damn i'm so late ( ... )

kajornwan August 4 2011, 07:54:50 UTC

LOL I'm nowhere near as strong or as brave as Feodora (perhaps as bitchy though)! She's more like my mom (my mom is scary). But I like seeing a very capable woman submit to her husband (at least in public). For once I want to create a very strong wife who's smart enough to not dominate her husband or belittle him in public just to show off her seme-ness and sees that belittling her own husband results only in making her "a woman who married a wimp." I love seeing her a lioness who shuts up at one word from Mikhail (it makes him awesome that way too XD). With Fei Long however, Mikhail plays the wife role totally (regardless of his position in bed ( ... )

portisheart August 4 2011, 16:02:05 UTC

uh oh.. so your mom's a cross between Fei Long & Fedora? with the temper of Mik in his less good days?
but about strong ladies, the apple hasn't falled far from the tree ^^

...sees that belittling her own husband results only in making her "a woman who married a wimp."
true.

...as he tattoos a Baishe logo on Mik's butts with his signature on the side...
ROFLMFAO!!!!! XDDDD

Now I want to see an uneducated fight between two highly educated crime lord/lady!
(!!very gross!! don't like don't read)

fight'd start like ( ... )

confusion_hime August 5 2011, 09:33:27 UTC

I love/hate Feodora. She's so brave and smart, worthy of Mikhail's wife but I hate her when she's being rude to Fei, although I understand how she feels. This is not a boring chapter at all. Nothing much happened, but the last parts had me all excited. Finally Fei and Mik met again. Woohoo!

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baby_fei August 16 2011, 14:37:06 UTC

You are probably the only one who wants to read about her, apart from me. I am actually dying to write Feodora's past and how she grew up with Mik ( of course, this isn't about witing Feodora at all, but a chance to do a child Mik who would be so damn adorable), how and why they came to have the relationship they do now. They have such a history of their own that it feels such a waste to not write. But as u can see, time is harder to come by than gold ( ... )