[fic] retribution Seven

Aug 02, 2011 07:50

Title: Retribution Seven ( Read more... )

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 06:30:19 UTC
I sure hope so too about Mikhail. In truth I now wish to write more about Fei's feelings regarding his mother. ^_^ But thank you so much for your comment.

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 06:33:28 UTC
LOL You should be glad that I'm evil, or else by now Mik and Fei will have gone to the Caribbean to get married and have 5 little adopted children and a chocolate Lab by now!! But I for one am glad to have moved something forward for the couple (or not). I have a few more obstacles up my sleeves though, it will be a long long ride before happily ever after, that is if I don't change my mind and decide to just kill Mik and give Fei to Yoh :D

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portisheart August 4 2011, 14:09:25 UTC
Mik Pitt & Fei Jolie? XDDD
there is a likeness, at least physically ~ pity Jolie's a woman though. and lucky Mik, at least HE will age well, or rather never XDD

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 16:17:06 UTC
Aye aye, Brangelina vs Frabatov? You know which team I'm on XD Plus the Frabatov kids will kick ass and make more money!

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 06:38:17 UTC
Feodora and Asami...Why the hell haven't I thought of that?? Let's have Asami suffer with Feodora while Mik and Fei sails off to paradise somewhere with Yoh tagging along to fill that king sized bed!!

The bitch hasn't gone anywhere, she's just found a new partner to go bitching with (I mean Fei does need a bitching partner from time to time). With wife and mistress such as these two, sooner or later poor(!)Mikhail will have to turn to Yoh :D *evil laugh*

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alexolgicant August 3 2011, 04:32:30 UTC

Ohhh you did it again, and i really enjoy these last chapters, by the way, all those sarcastics lines are so sweet and smooth that I would like to take them borrow, could I? please update soon and congrats. XOXO

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 06:40:24 UTC
Thank you for the kind comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it . Of course, take these lines but don't forget to promote the couple while at it XD I'm working on a joint project Mik x Fei DJ at the moment so updates may come a little late. Will try to be quick though ^_^

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alexolgicant August 5 2011, 03:52:49 UTC

Please don't take so long and good look, by the way if you want someone to translate your work to Spanish
Let me know I am available and I will enjoy to do it.

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char_comet August 3 2011, 05:20:29 UTC
Thank you for the fast update and the new beautiful chapter. I didn't expect that Fei Long and Feodora could have that chat XD

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 06:46:56 UTC
The fast update is thanks to Jani ^_^ As for Feodora and Fei, I kind of needed to move on with other things, and, hey, the wife and lover has to have a talk at some point XD I hope the chapter wasn't so bad (even though it seems to be from the lack of comments lol). Oh well, I enjoyed writing it though, i just love to see Mikhail cry. Thanks for stopping by as always.

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char_comet August 4 2011, 07:24:11 UTC
I hope the chapter wasn't so bad (even though it seems to be from the lack of comments lol)

Probably the chapter has no lacks so people don't know what to say. You should know that there are many readers who enjoy the reading without commenting and that you've got a huge audience ^_^

About me I have to say that I'm feeling like not telling much anymore when commenting fics because it seems that I am an idiot and my opinion comes always for not understanding anything of what is written. Must improve my english and my cleverness or be quite ^_-

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kajornwan August 4 2011, 08:14:59 UTC
Hey, that's not true. I find that your criticism always have reasonable grounds, if writers can't make you understand then it's the weakness of the writer. You're far from being an idiot and you will not believe, even though I always give my own reasons in our arguments, how much your input has shaped my stories so far. While I still write what I want, I'm more careful now when I tell a story in order to make it tighter and because of readers like you who have the guts to tell your displeasure I am able to improve the quality of my writing. As hard as it is for writers to take criticism (and I assure you it is painful), I find that readers always have a good reason to complain, there's always something lacking in a fic that receives complaint when I look back ^_^ Don't be discouraged.

BTW, the DJ is almost finished and should be posted this week or the next, I hope you will enjoy it *is nervous* ^^!

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