[fic] Retribution Eight

[kajornwan]

I’m so sorry for the lateness of this chapter, not to mention it’s really short for my standard. I hope it’s not too bad.

Title: Retribution Eight
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Nothing really. Does boredom count?
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, Feodora
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters:

Comments

[forgottenraine]

A baby?! Ok now I am shocked. This is going to get very interesting! And I am guessing we will see Asami soon since Fei Long finally decided to deal with that problem. I actually LOVED reading this chpater. I did get a little sad reading the MikXFei moment though. Those two have to have a happy ending! But oh boy, a baby. I don't know how Fei Long is going to take that news.

Now I am getting anxious for the next chapter! I wonder how Fei Long is going to react! But I guess a baby is necessary since Alexei is dead and if Fei Long and Mikhail are to be together forever, then there needs to be heir to the family... I suppose. Thank for the update! It is great and you shouldn't feel insecure about it.

I will be waiting for your next update and good luck with it!

[kajornwan]

Finally got around to answering comments *sighs at self*

XD I'm glad everyone is shocked, since one(!) reader read my mind years ago back in Revelation that the baby is coming, and another did last chapter that I had to screen her comment lol. Asami will be back on full time soon but I'm lame at writing Asami so don't expect much >_< Glad you like the chapter. The sad part was my favorite to write. Thanks for always stopping by to let me know your thoughts.

[confusion_hime]

You evil, evil writer... a cliffie! You just killed me! But the long wait was definitely worth it. Love the little MikxFei moment there but aaaaaaaaaaaahhhh! What's going to happen? I need to know so I hope you'll update soon. And I'll definitely looking forward to reading the second part of the DJ! Yay! :D

[kajornwan]

Evil? You've seen nothing yet! My pure evilness will be released a few chapters from now. But thank you so much for stopping by and let me know you enjoyed it. I'll try to update as soon as I can.

[delwynmarch]

I should not be feeling sad during a sad Mik/Fei moment, dammit! And I should definitely not feel happy when they have the tiniest of hopeful moments D: ! Shipping wars, I do them wrong :P

Also, Feodora only grows more awesome with each chapter :)

Now I want to see Mikhail's reaction to the baby news... but I fear seeing Fei Long's handling of Asami. It's gonna be painful and angsty, isn't it? *huggles a disgusted Fei Long* Poor baby...

[kajornwan]

Awwwww that has to be the sweetest comment you've given me yet! But tell me about it, I've done the shipping wars wrong for way too many times XD

Glad you like Feodora. I'm having fun unleashing her bitchiness lol Fei's handling of Asami will be .... different, that much I promise you. But a disgusted Fei Long is a right guess. :D

[masamune_luvr]

I just started on cruel intentions, and i want to say you've done an awesome job on it. I can't wait to read the full trilogy :D

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for giving it a try. I hope to not disappoint when you read the full trilogy. ^_^

[yoan_chan]

Pregnant? That bitch is pregnant?! O.O no no no no no!!!!!!!! I hope it's a joke. It must be joke... Sorry, but I hate her =.=. Knowing about child Mikhail may not agree to divorce... poor Fei. It would be cruel of me wanting her to lost child, but it would be better if she died after giving birth. Fei would adopt baby and he and Mik would raise a baby as happy family :D Ehhh...too much angst for my poor heart in this chapter...:P

[kajornwan]

LOL yes, the bitch is pregnant (gosh I want to celebrate every time someone calls her a bitch!) She is somewhat meant to be hated actually, and if you hate her that much I consider it a success *yay*. But hang in there, the baby may (or may not) be such a tragedy. Thank you so much for staying around and stopping by to comment as always. *hugs*