[fic] Retribution Eight

[kajornwan]

I’m so sorry for the lateness of this chapter, not to mention it’s really short for my standard. I hope it’s not too bad.

Title: Retribution Eight
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Nothing really. Does boredom count?
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, Feodora
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters:

Comments

[narcx006]

Wow. I was really shocked at the end. Now Feodora is a big problem.
Mik and Fei are so cute together. I like reading scenes like these, even if they are a bit sad.

Thank you for this chapter!

I'm looking forward to the next one and also to DJ's!

[kajornwan]

Feodora is a big problem? I'm not sure but she IS a problem XD I'm glad you like the Mik x Fei part, I enjoyed writing it so much and I miss them together too. Thank you for stopping by and let me know your thoughts. Will try to update asap.

[nikkita_maldita]

ooooh, baby! Now that would get Papa Vlad off Misha's back. Make me wonder if Mik wont divorce her for the sake of the baby. And i love the part where Fei was removing the love bracelet. It was so heartbreaking! But Fei wanting Misha to put the bracelet on him is truly monumental; he finally realized he's Misha's man!

If Fei is going to Japan, does it mean Asami is not going to return to China?

[kajornwan]

Well, it will keep papa alive, losing a son but gaining a grandchild. But as for their reactions, it's a surprise ^_^ I'm glad you were moved by the bracelet scene. I especially love writing this the most. Thank you for stopping by and let me know this.

Oh, Asami is coming back full time, but why and how shall be revealed soon enough ^_^

[c11]

oh yes another chapter to close a hard week at work. You have a very good timing my dear and it worths the wait. The baby is a real surprise and an interesting plot to be sure. You've made me laugh with the Wong's part.
hope you are well with your family.

[kajornwan]

Gosh I missed you!!! I'm so glad you're still around. You're well too I hope? Thanks for stopping by and comment. I'm so glad to see you and hear that you enjoyed it.

[kajornwan]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Will try to update soon.

[shiro245]

You really are a tricky writer.

It gonna be so complicated now that a baby involved. Should Mikhail divorce or not since the baby should have both parents but if the parents are not happy then when the baby grow up, he or she will be miserable.
Maybe Fei can raise the baby since he is gently with Tao. They can be a happy family too.
Not to mention Feodora can find her happiness at last.

Thanks you for the update. I love all your fic with Mik & Fei.

[kajornwan]

Actually the real complication and drama has nothing to do with the baby XD But it will be complicated. Thank you for stopping by and let me know you enjoyed it. I will try to update as soon as I can.