[fic] Retribution Eight

[kajornwan]

I’m so sorry for the lateness of this chapter, not to mention it’s really short for my standard. I hope it’s not too bad.

Title: Retribution Eight
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Nothing really. Does boredom count?
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, Feodora
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters:

Comments

[cliseth]

¡Holy Shit! ¿That whore Is pregnant? Noooooooo!!! This will be a terrible news for Fei, insurance this will complicate the things too much!! :'( ... OMG also I can't magine what happen whit Fei when Vladimir realize that his son is dead and that Fei was with him in that moment... Drama, drama and more drama... I love this!

Really your fic is wonderful, I love it! ...I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

[kajornwan]

Drama it is. That's sort of my signature. But the mess has just begun !!! *Evil laugh*

Thanks for stopping by. I'm glad you enjoyed it and will try to update soon.

[bbly]

Oh Gosh, a baby!?!.. How will Feilong take this news? Will he stay, will he leave??.. Oh my!
I can't wait to see the formidable/haughty Fei, and sexy Mikhail again.
Please, please, plllleeeaaase update as soon as you can! :-)

[kajornwan]

Oh yes, baby. But me too, I can't wait to write Mik x Fei together again!! Will try to update soon.

[angel0399]

Wow, a bitch and a whore. Don't you just love it when your readers love your characters? Lol!

[kandamio]

Wow, your story is so amazing! I was already a MikxFei fan, but now that I've read all the chapters in a row (yes, I spent the whole day before my computer <3!)I'm falling more and more for them! I think they're very realistically described, their thoughts and moves make sense too. You really are a living god, killed my brain, please keep up the great job! Just when I thought you couldn't do better than than, coz it seemed perfect to me, you make such a cliff-hanger with Asami and Feodora (where do you find so much ideas?! <3)
Like everyone, I'm eager to read your next update <3! (PS: sorry if my english is somewhat wrong or weird and therefore stain your so-perfect livejournal TT, it's not my first language ^^"...)

[kajornwan]

I swear lj didn't notify me of your comment and I just found out about it now. *kicks lj*

Yay! For once, someone who was already a Mik x Fei before reading CI. I feel so happy for the pairing! They do have fans *cries tears of joy* Thank you so much for your sweet comment *blushes* I will try to not disappoint. The next chapter is up and, well, there's more cliffhanger there XD

Thanks again for stopping by to comment. It means a lot to me. See you around.

Emmmmmmm... good idea?

[kandamio]

Just read the whole story again... You're evil for I cannot think of anythink else while studying (by the way, just read a book about chinese mafia for history and realised, at the end, that Baishe didn't exist TT... Was I the only fool to believe its existence?) Tell your muse I love and thank her, she greatly deserves a few praises. I want to see where all this is leading, though I suspect there'll be Toh and Yan ^^... Don't urge yourself though, I don't want it to end, MikxFei is just so sweeeeeeet TT!

Just thought about it... Given that I'm french and have a good comprehension of english (cannot say expression yet, since, as you have probably already noticed, I still have a hard way trying to express myself without major mistakes TT), could I tranlate CI in french? Your work is so great that I'd like to help spreading it around the world... Pretty please *puppy eyes*?
(and of course there are MikxFei fans in this world <3... There are generally even more after I told my friends about how wonderful this pairing is xD...)

Re: Emmmmmmm... good idea?

[kajornwan]

I just got back from a vacation in Africa hence the late reply. Thanks again for the sweet comment. I'm glad I can entertain. Well, guess what, Mik x Fei in my head is preventing me from working properly too XD

Oooh, French? That will be wonderful! I mean if you're up to it, of course. It's a looong story! Thank you for offering to spread the love in yet another language. Just let me know when and where you post so I can update my lj with the links ^_^

P.S. I also have an interview with sensei in French that needs to be translated, would you be able to help? *puppy eyes back*

[perriexyx]

keep posting like this it’s really very good idea, you are awesome!