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kajornwan

[fic] Retribution Eight

Sep 16, 2011 09:23

I’m so sorry for the lateness of this chapter, not to mention it’s really short for my standard. I hope it’s not too bad.

Title: Retribution Eight
Rating: PG-13
Warning: Nothing really. Does boredom count?
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, Feodora
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
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kajornwan November 19 2011, 00:12:36 UTC

Ha! Baby Dior indeed. But where's the joy, sweetie? I'm so excited Mik will have a baby. Can you just imagine that baby boy with those curls and mischief? I think Fei should later kill Feodora and keep the kid XDThen we'll have a big happy family (and then you'll draw me Mikhail playing with his son *squeeeee*) He'll make such acute daddy.

immortalpyro November 8 2011, 20:16:33 UTC

I stubbled upon CI PDFs on google and fell madly in love and alittle obsessed *actually completely* I read the first and second CI in a day which is not easy with a one year old, who enjoys driving me crazy. It took me a bit to find the 3 CI but since I have I haven't put down my phone. The anticipation is killing me cant wait for the next chapter. I Love your writing *sighs* Just to warn you that now you have a story stalker (just made that up). Your a great writer and I'm your fan for life as well as you story stalker.

kajornwan November 19 2011, 00:21:53 UTC

Due to lj's failure to notify, I just found your comment today. Thank you so much for stopping by to let me know you're enjoying the story so far. I'll try not to disappoint. The new chapter is up in my lj and I hope you enjoy it as well. Thanks again for your sweet words, it really helps keep me going. See you around. ^_^

jamie310 November 18 2011, 05:05:15 UTC

Great chapter

kajornwan November 19 2011, 00:22:15 UTC

Thank you ^_^ I'm glad you enjoyed it.

chibi_tenipuri March 24 2012, 14:50:27 UTC

I knew that there will be a baby in the scene. It'll be interesting to see how he/she will impact the three of them: fei, mik and feodora.

Please keep writing this awesome story :) x

anonymous October 27 2013, 13:18:02 UTC

I have a question! How is she three months pregnant? I don't recall them having sex except for that one time in CI and when Mik raped her, which was only a few days before.

kajornwan October 27 2013, 14:01:02 UTC

I would tell you but that would be a spoiler :D The hint is in the scene when she was baking scones (at least I think it was). It shall be revealed soon enough.

But wow, i'm impressed that someone actually picked up the fact that Mikhail would never cheat on his lover with his wife XD