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kajornwan

[fic] Retribution Ten

Mar 11, 2012 09:05

Oh hell, I haven't updated since November. It's unforgivable! I'm so sorry. I'll try to start the next chapter soon.

Title: Retribution Ten
Rating: PG-13
Warning: None
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail, Yoh, Asami, Akihito, and OCs
Spoiler: Spoiler for NT arc
Disclaimer: All characters belong to YA sensei.
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kajornwan March 19 2012, 04:23:23 UTC

Oh, everyone wants to save him, don't worry, the question is, does Fei need to be saved at all? XD I'm not really used to writing Ax A and I'm glad I managed to pull it off somehow. Thank you so much for stopping by and let me know you liked it. ^_^

sheera_greywolf March 11 2012, 11:28:57 UTC

Go AKI!!! I love how he just barrel through and strings Asami along.

kajornwan March 19 2012, 04:33:07 UTC

LOL well, I needed someone to drag Asami over to Hong Kong. Aki is really handy XD Thanks for stopping by

randrews25 March 11 2012, 14:54:18 UTC

HOLY SHIT! THIS STORY IS EPIC!!!
I'm at the dge of my seat here biting my nails for fei. And as for aki? YOU GO BOY!XDDD

seriously, this story is awesome :D

kajornwan March 19 2012, 04:37:35 UTC

O_O I did not know you're reading! Did you jump in in the middle or read from the beginning? But wow, thank you so much for the comment. A compliment from a great writer is always a gem to keep! I hope I don't disappoint in the next one ^_^ Great to see you here. (When are you going to give me more Mik xFei *begs*)

randrews25 March 19 2012, 12:11:10 UTC

I started reading from a couple chapters ago, when we first started talking. If you're referring to this chapter, I read it all.

I'll be finishing Hatsu Kousou soon, so hopefully then I can get back to my mikxfei story xDD

You always do good with your chapters, don't worry and good job :D

kajornwan March 19 2012, 13:22:07 UTC

Oh jumped in the middle too? I don't blame you, it's painfully long. >_< Although I must say, that it's actually the first arc of CI that readers find most exciting. I think the second is sort of boring ^^! and this last one is way to dark and deprssing. I miss them together, and since the plot will not allow for some time, I will have to beg this of you!! *_* believe it or not, I am desperate enough for a good MikxFei that I just read tradij's german MikxFei through google translate. (it was really really good though).

See you around *hugs*

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narcx006 March 11 2012, 19:42:40 UTC

This story is too exciting!!!:D What I like is that you write the characters so well. Asami,Aki and Yoh are so IC for me and that makes your story so realistic or close to the canon...

But I hope Fei won't be beaten up severely. He needs his pretty face and everything else ^^:D

kajornwan March 19 2012, 04:44:14 UTC

Oh thank you so much for stopping by. I'm glad you like it. I'm going for action movie from now rather than drama like before, and it's great to know it's working quite a bit. Good to hear I didn't mess up Ax A too since I'm so unfamiliar with writing them. They will have a lot of space from now, though not of their own.

Actually I kind of want Fei beaten up physically in the way that it makes him appear real and as tough as any seme. Nobody ever beats up Fei like a man and they all try to molest him instead in fics. Fei is a man, deadly and tough, and he deserves to be treated as such, not as a woman or a frail uke. So I'm afraid he will be beaten up quite roughly here ^^! But I won't throw acid in his face or anything oh no, he needs his pretty face (for my sake XD)

narcx006 March 19 2012, 16:02:42 UTC

Yes, I too like when he is displayed as a strong proud person. Because that's why I like him :)

I will feel sorry for him then but if they don't harm him permanently (even if they would) he will get over it somehow:)

"But I won't throw acid in his face or anything oh no..."

Thank God! I really thought you would do something brutal to him. Not acid but something else... XD
Sorry maybe I watch too much horror T_T

thegreencloud March 11 2012, 22:17:59 UTC

I'm so glad you've updated ;_; I loved the chapter

kajornwan March 19 2012, 04:45:15 UTC

I'm so glad you're still reading *_* I'm beginning to think no one does anymore given the time I take to update. Will try to do so sooner this time. Thank you for stopping by.

thegreencloud March 19 2012, 19:45:01 UTC

hehe, tbh I used to read this story back in 2007 and stopped but when I saw your update in november, I was all "omg, this story is still not over O:" so I decided to reread it in a marathon way and it reminded me of how much I loved/miss Fei Long and now I'm back into yaoi bc of it lol (and we might get fei long back for a tiny bit so I'm glad ^_^)