[fic]Retribution Fourteen

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the really late update (at least I didn't take six months). I'm not sure about the quality of this chapter since my brain may still contain some toxin from the recent you-know-what. But if I don't try to get this out, I may just quit this fic altogether. I usually edit a lot more times than this. Sorry

Comments

[scarlett_bshc07]

SPOT. xD

Oh, and MikxFei FOREVER! LOL! I swear I'll BRB. ;)

[kajornwan]

Lol. I owe you a reply too. Goddamn it, work. Stop nagging me!

[scarlett_bshc07]

Nah, it's alright. I don't really mind, cuz I'm busy too. xD

[scarlett_bshc07]

OK. So this is my first-ever comment for CI, and I have to admit that I feel more than just a tad excited (<= UNDERSTATEMENT) about finally un-lurking after FIVE fucking years of doing what I do best. Basically, this marks the end of my career as a professional lurker, so it's nothing short of a momentous event and definitely a cause for celebration. HURRAH! *pops champagne*

Oh, my goodness. I have SO much to say, but I'm not quite sure where to begin. It's ridiculous, really. Somehow, I feel like a blushing virgin (which I AM, but that's not the point). LOL! I guess I'll just allow my words to type themselves and see what happens. :P

Here goes nothing.

SFYHGIKWRHOFTR;HPWJGVFH'RHP]ADKGNVBCGTORGH!

>___> Er. That didn't work as well as I thought it would. WORDS. STAHP.

*sighs* So my brain it is, then. I just gotta warn you, though, that it still hasn't fully recovered from the meltdown caused by sweet, darling Alexis, and as if that isn't bad enough, it also has the tendency to crash every once in a while as a side effect. If I

[kajornwan]

Lol. Well, that was meant to excite and I am glad I managed to pull it off even though the other guy wasn't Fei. I had a lot of fun showing the coarser side of Mikhail here, because I think he could be very uncaring and harsh with people he doesn't love and that makes Fei oh so special to get him to soften up like that. And then I can't wait to molest Mik some more soon!! XD

Thanks for stopping by to show your support for this pairing still.

[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

By the time the novel came out I had already written half of this, so that helped ^^! But It's really the MxF that start popping up in my journal lately that I feel they need something to cure this cancer as much as I do, and I kind of feel responsible. I have to admit I didn't feel as 'engaged' when I wrote this chapter but if I don't push myself now my live for this pairing might be gone forever. Luckily, I think I still live them enough.

I'm glad you can enjoy my Yoh. I have always loved writing him regardless of my preference for MxF. Yoh has so many things a writer should address and quite a huge challenge to write. And gosh I just love Feodora more and more now.

Don't worry, I am not going to let FNR fuck with my head enough to fuck up my epic fic (in length). And I'm not sure if Mikhail can get it up. Gotta get him Viagra or something lol *runs*

Thank you for stopping by and give me the support. I will try to write more on the plane to Egypt or something.

[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

Gosh I wish I could do just that !! But thank you for the wish. I hope it will go smoothly too

[wilhelminac]

Oh how I love Mik too! ^^

You know that I'm a new Mik x Fei fan, and although I'm relatively new to your fic, I am relieved to know that you are going to finish it despite the new novel. You've put too much time and energy into it over the years to just abandon it outright. This chapter was great! That battle of wills between Mikhail and Toh was hot! And the part where Mikhail reminisced about those who had died while on the verge of accepting that he would lose Fei too was so very touching.

Canon doesn't really matter: you're a great storyteller and it's a damn good fic! =D

I'm looking forward to your next chapter.

[kajornwan]

Thank you for the support in this. I really do need it. a big part of it was that a lot of MxF fans have really shown me that they have no intention to quit, and I thought having come this far it is only fair that I take responsibility to finish what I've started. So thank you for this, and I hope that my true love for this couple would return soon. I will try to update as soon as I can.

[wilhelminac]

I think all writers need support. Someone encouraged me to continue writing M x F when canon became disappointing...so I am just "paying it forward." :) And although you don't owe us readers anything I am really glad that you are planning to continue! (And please give us more Feodora! I love her).

MicXToh

[kissweiss]

I love the meeting of Mic and Toh.May be I know what Toh is thinking.He must be weak as Mickhail is just full of wildness and sexually appealing while he turned really dangerous.Even though he knows all he did is for Feilong he can not hold himself to let Mic go instead of taking the risk of playing with Mic.Anyway ，if he wins,he can enjoy the defeated and jealous face of Feilong，and this maybe attracts him most.

Re: MicXToh

[kajornwan]

Thank you for stopping by and let me know you enjoyed it. With Toh, yes, the feelings of attraction for Mikhail that he already has had been multiplied by the fact that he wants what Fei Long has and also wants him to suffer as well. Also because Fei's mother, if you remember, has snatched his dad from his mom, so this is also a kind of revenge. I hope you will continue to enjoy the next few chapters with them. Will try to update soon ^_^