[fic]Retribution Fourteen

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the really late update (at least I didn't take six months). I'm not sure about the quality of this chapter since my brain may still contain some toxin from the recent you-know-what. But if I don't try to get this out, I may just quit this fic altogether. I usually edit a lot more times than this. Sorry

Comments

[char_comet]

First of all thank you for not giving up on continuing this story of yours even if the recent events disappointed you so much

[kajornwan]

First of all, you should never hold back with me. Criticism always hurt but only a coward and a loser can't take it and I don't want to be one. Besides, even if we always argue, it doesn't mean I take it to heart or that I completely disagree. I think a lot of your comments (and others) help shape many things I had not thought of in the beginning into what it is now. Besides, the only person I specifically told not to read or comment is Alexis, because that woman has the skills to kill me even if I don't commit suicide should she wish to criticize my mistakes, and I know I do make those every chapter. *cries

[char_comet]

I just wanted to point out that I do like Mikhail, so it's not because I don't like him that I found "annoying" the way how he's portrayed in that meeting (and generally in many other situations :-P)
And it's not even that I would like to see him suffer, because I am not like you who love to torture your fav characters....
But sometimes I find in your writing of him a sort of adulation and don't think it is too good for the story. I know this is because you love him too much...it's more or less what I thought when I read the Mikhail/Asami fic written by Shelly. There it happened the same thing: she loves Asami so much that what had to be a non-con sex became something where Asami was the one who did the rules and "forced" Mikhail to act like he wanted, instead of the contrary. And that - to me - was not a credible scene.

[angel0399]

Aww now I see where that tweet came from =)

[satsuki82]

first of all, I apologize because my English is very bad, but from the other side of the world I support you.
I can not believe you let write in the most exciting part, and honestly I will not survive if you leave me waiting for another month.
 But what I really hope is that this story has a happy ending, I do not see how it is possible, but I do not want anyone else to die, I cry a lot by alexei.

well take care of yourself and get inspired a lot on your trip (lemonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn)

[kajornwan]

You never have to apologize because of your English. It is my second language too and I have also improved a lot from writing and reading comments. And it really doesn't matter if you can write in perfect English, a great support is what it is, and I truly appreciate it, thank you.

I probably cannot update that fast but I will try, maybe on the plane or something. And don't worry, it will have a happy ending. That much I promise you. So hang on. I can't wait to get there either, but there are still a lot more issues to address. ^_^

THANK YOU

[dead_sakura_78]

Just wanted to say:
BIG THANK YOU that you gathered your strength to proceed this amazing trilogy whatever happens around!!! I had a really shitty day today, so this update from you made things better. ;)

Re: THANK YOU

[kajornwan]

I'm glad it helps make your day better. It was really hard to pull myself together to finish this one, it I think now that I've got it going, I should be able to manage the next with more enthusiasm, I hope it will not disappoint. Thank you so much for letting me know you like it *hugs*

[ashanrahm]

Thank you for updating! I've been a faithful follower for a while now LOL!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! Enjoy your trip! :)

[kajornwan]

Oh hello there ^_^ I'm glad you decided to unlurk now because I kind of need it a lot. As long as there are people still wanting to read, I will try to finish this story. Thanks again for letting me know you are enjoying it.

[supercute90]

Amazing work!^_^ keep it coming!:)

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for doing this CI marathon! And thank you for leaving me comments at the end of some of the chapters. It means a lot to me. I hope I can write the next installment soon.