[fic]Retribution Fourteen

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the really late update (at least I didn't take six months). I'm not sure about the quality of this chapter since my brain may still contain some toxin from the recent you-know-what. But if I don't try to get this out, I may just quit this fic altogether. I usually edit a lot more times than this. Sorry

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[delwynmarch]

Everyone wants your Mik. I want your Feodora in a man's body; you got that in stock somewhere :P ?

Also, that Mik vs. Yoh fight made me purr with enjoyment. Sooooo good! So intense, and passionate, and violent, and treacherous! ROWR!

And I've turned into the worst kind of fanboy over Yoh/Feo O.o I see it everywhere! She's got her gun to his head? I imagine how they'll laugh about it ten years from now before kissing violently! She invades his private space to threaten him with death? I pretty much already see them tearing each other's clothes off O.o What the Hell have you done to me?? How did you make me fanatically ship a pairing you didn't intend, and which happens to be a het pairing on top of everything?? This is crazy... but gooooood, oh yeah :D ! You can have MikxFei all you want, I'll have fun over there with Yoh/Feo :P

[scarlett_bshc07]

And I've turned into the worst kind of fanboy over Yoh/Feo O.o

I've never even considered them before, but I have to admit that they'd make for a delicious couple, indeed (even though het normally squicks me)! I'll support this movement. Yes, please. What do you want in return, Faye? My penthouse? A Lamborghini? A diamond Cartier necklace? Name your price.

Oh, and also: you write too well =_= I could never pull off such intensity.

This is exactly why I'm quite hesitant to continue my own MxF. =_=

[delwynmarch]

What do you want in return, Faye? My penthouse? A Lamborghini? A diamond Cartier necklace? Name your price.

Careful there! She might take you up on that Lamborghini offer ;)

This is exactly why I'm quite hesitant to continue my own MxF. =_=

It's rather different, though :P Nobody is expecting your MxF to be on the level of the CI trilogy. My YxF, on the other hand, is supposed to be that 10.000 chapters-long EPIC explaining in all possible angsty details how Yoh and Fei Long could ever possibly and most importantly realistically get happily together. In short, it's supposed to be the YxF pendant to CI... Faye put me up to it, and my entire digestive system is rioting now because it's clear that I bit FAR more than I can chew... *is scared*

[scarlett_bshc07]

LOL! If she's willing to book a flight to NYC just to pick it up, not to mention go through customs and all that crap, why not? xDDD

It's rather different, though :P Nobody is expecting your MxF to be on the level of the CI trilogy.

xDDD I know, but it doesn't make me any less terrified, because we all got used to the superior quality of Faye's writing. Hmm... How should I put this? Imagine a Bugatti Veyron and a Toyota Vios parked next to each other. Yeah.

My YxF, on the other hand, is supposed to be that 10.000 chapters-long EPIC...

I'll be expecting 10,000 chapters, then. You better get started. xD

In short, it's supposed to be the YxF pendant to CI... Faye put me up to it, and my entire digestive system is rioting now because it's clear that I bit FAR more than I can chew... *is scared*

Good luck, hun. I'll be praying for you. xD You can do it. I believe in you. :)

Please continue to story!

[mikfei2012]

Hi Fayne,

Honestly I only came across the Finder series yesterday, and I was so in awe with Feilong and Mikhail that I went straight to searching for fan fictions about them. I didn't even finish reading the whole manga series (not really an Asami or Aki fan)! Your Cruel Intentions series was highly recommended by almost every forum and blog I visited, and I can certainly see why. I read the whole thing in one day!

Thank you so much for giving us such a captivating novel. I really do hope you continue and finish the story, Mik and Fei deserve a happy ending! I can't wait for more updates. MikxFei FOREVER!

Re: Please continue to story!

[mikfei2012]

Btw I was red-eyed throughout most of the first 2 arcs of C.I., and I totally bawled my eyes out for the Retribution chapters. Especially since I had Yiruma's "Kiss the rain" on replay the whole time.

Re: Please continue to story!

[kajornwan]

Aww, it gives me so much pleasure to know I can make a reader feel so much! *evil laugh**

Re: Please continue to story!

[kajornwan]

Wow! I am so happy to meet a new fan! Especially now that the hope for this pairing should be lost, strangely more and more MxF pops up out of nowhere *tears in eyes*. Thank you so much for lettIng me know you like it. I will try to update as soon as I have time to breathe! I wasn't aware that CI has been recommended anywhere and I'm most grateful for this. Thanks again and I hope the future chapters will not disappoint.

[anonymous]

Oh my god that was INTENSE. Thank you thank you for not giving up on this incredible fic! It turned me into a die hard Mikhail x Fei fangirl and for that I'll forever be thankful. :) I just wish I could write praise that sums up just how much I adore you and this fic, but it's already been stated far more eloquently by your other readers.

Oh, and the Mik vs Yoh scene? UNF!

...they could make for a pretty hot couple too, no? *SHOT*

Ah I am curious about one thing... Yamano-sensei's novel? I have no way of reading it (unless someone can link me?) and kinda want to know why it's so bad. Will I regret asking?

- Erebus

[kajornwan]

If there is one reason why I would not give up this fic is because my readers have not given up on me! It would not be fair at all! Thank you for liking it so much and letting me know. I will try to write as soon as I have time and can pull myself together. From here it's very difficult and angsty to write and I don't want to mess it up *is scared

[angel0399]

Yeah... Faye's not even kidding. As someone who tried to give it a chance (been reading VF since 2009), it has made me repeatedly head my keyboard on numerous occasions. Unless FeixTao is a pairing that you fancy, it's not worth your braincells.

[angel0399]

Your icon is all kinds of love! *glomps*

[kajornwan]

Because I feel a bit embarrassed declaring myself publicly as a fan of YA. Let's face it, now it's almost like I'm in a 50 shades of Grey fandom =_= Thanks to FNR

I'm glad you like Alexei's ghost. I love the adult ghost though XD

Gosh, don't say testosterone. I'm telling you that word does NC-17 things to me that should be illegal.

ROFLMAO @ "By your hand..job"!! OMG, woman, your mind is an treasure cave!!! *dies laughing*

Well, I didn't hesitate one bit. I have been drooling forever to molest Mikhail XD Ok, not here, but this is just the tip of the iceberg. Will you hate it? >_<

Thank you, sweetie for stopping by. And sorry I didn't poke you. I forgot you don't check lj often. And I had a gazillion things to finish before I leave on Sunday night so I'm forgetful right now ^^! *begs for forgiveness*

[delwynmarch]

Gosh, don't say testosterone. I'm telling you that word does NC-17 things to me that should be illegal.

*blink* LOL! You're getting off on just the word?? Sorry, but that's hilarious for someone like me, who shoots the actual stuff into my thigh every three weeks :D