[fic]Retribution Fourteen

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the really late update (at least I didn't take six months). I'm not sure about the quality of this chapter since my brain may still contain some toxin from the recent you-know-what. But if I don't try to get this out, I may just quit this fic altogether. I usually edit a lot more times than this. Sorry

Comments

[erafinn29]

Hi everyone! :) I,m new here. For a very long time I have been reading Cruel Intentions and now FINALLY I have the courage to thank you for creating such an amazing, beautiful, touching and addictive story. Every time I see new chapter it brings joy to my day. :) There are times when I need to escape from reality because my life has been quite stressful nowadays.

I have been Fei fan for a long time but it's because of YOU that I have fallen in love with MikxFei. I also consider myself as FeixYoh fan but what you have created is something so special and powerful that even so called "canon" cannot ever destroy! No matter what I will continue to read the story of Mikhail and Fei Long.

Oh yeah and MikxFei FOREVER! :D

[angel0399]

Hi there and welcome!! *waves*

[erafinn29]

Thanks! ^_^ *waves back*

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the late reply. I'm about to go on a trip and tha last week has been really busy for me. I'm glad you decides to unlurk. I'm always eager to meet new friends here and you never have to hesitate commenting or throwing any tomatoes. It's great to be able to welcome yet another Fei fan. I maybe a die hard Mik fan but I like Yoh a lot now that even I have episodes of cheating MikxFei XD anyway, thank you do much for stopping by and let me know that I managed to spread some MxF live with this after all!!

[delwynmarch]

Yoo-hoo, hello there :D !

Pardon me for intruding here, I can see how many fans you have got and you do not need somebody blabbing out stupid comments without having much too say.

On the contrary ;) Faye LOVES to blab on and on and on, and she loves it just as much when other people do it :P And if you have to split your comments into two or three parts because it's too long, that's even better :D So feel free to comment to your heart's content around here!

[angel0399]

Hi there!! Don't apologize, feel free to de-lurk and jump in anytime ^_^

[kajornwan]

And for this, I paid for her books at each at very heavy price. On top of keeping many Fei fans from wandering off shipping other fandom while she abandoned him for years so that she can sell more books when she decides to write him again. Actually I have helped paid her bills and gave her free marketing for 5 years. I think that's fair XD (sorry, I'm still too bitter and butt-hurt on the issue ^^! That wasn't me venting at you or anything - just me venting in general

[angel0399]

My favorite part of the chapter was by the way that wonderful clash of Mikhail and Yoh! It was so great to finally see Yoh losing his calm and quite literally starting to pull no punches - and Mikhail responding in just the same way. There for once they were equals, no mafia boss or underling, but just two men in love with Fei Long who were pushed to the limit by their fear of his well-being and their own utter helplessness.

Yes!! This is also my favorite scene in the chapter. I love how vulnerable they've become all b/c of their love for one man. If I'd been told in the beginning of CI that they'd be equals for once, I would never have believed it. Then again, if someone had told me that a female character would become loved in a BL story, I also would have found that hard to believe lol!! But that's the power Faye has ^_^

[kajornwan]

I'm so glad I have a beta who helps me answer comments during times of need as well! I really need to be paying you!! *hugs*

I bet Alexis wil Still stone me for Feodora if she reads lol She has already yelled at me so bad for introducing a female Character in yaoi XD But as I said below, I couldn't resist writing one female to show Asami that he's not god, and well, I figured I should put a Mik fangirl in there just to state the very fact that Mikhail is SUCH a catch (Fei already has three fanboys!).

[angel0399]

Lol I so agree with your reasoning! I like that they're knocked down a peg or two and show that they are human and vulnerable. And I'm sure Alexis will make an exception when she reads how badass Feodora is ^_^

I'm happy to help in any way! Have a great vacation!

[angel0399]

despite that bad fanfiction that somehow got mixed up with our much anticipated Fei Long novel!

Lol love it!!

[kajornwan]

Word indeed!!

[kajornwan]

Gosh I love two parts review

[j0h4nn4]

Thank you for a good story!!^^

[kajornwan]

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it ^_^