[fic]Retribution Fifteen

[kajornwan]

I promised I would update on Fei Long's birthday, did I do good or not? XD So sorry for the unforgivably late update, but hey, at least I managed to get back into the fandom. I didn't have much time to edit so sorry for all the crappy stuff. I hope you all enjoy and join me wishing Fei a very happy birthday

Comments

[erafinn29]

This was really worth waiting for. Thank you so much! :'D

Mikhail, Yoh, Feodora and especially Fei, I fall in love with these characters more and more every time. ^^

Happy birthday dear Fei!!!

[kajornwan]

That's so good to hear. I'd hate to have you guys wait for so long just to disappoint. I hope that you will continue to love these characters and stay with us for a long long time since the fandom seems to be dying somehow. Thanks for stopping by,

[erafinn29]

Well don't worry, I'm here to stay. :) We have to keep this fandom alive no matter what for Feilong's sake.

[kajornwan]

LOL I don't think Yoh loves betraying, but I love to think he is the kind of man who is driven by his priorities not moral issues, which is why he makes a great mole and why his coldness is so hot sometimes. I can't explain him like this, Yoh needs to be written in chapters to be understood! To me, at least. I loved writing the kiss too. And after this Yoh can tell Fei Mik kissed him, and we'll get to witness Fei's jaw drop (or Mik getting his ear pulled!) lol

[kajornwan]

Thank you! I'm glad to see us all here still loving Fei!

[domi75]

oh, it is a good story! enjoyed to read! thanks:)

[kajornwan]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[char_comet]

It is really woth the wait! ^_- I am grateful to you for always writing chapters so long and full of content. You can go through them without fearing they finish too soon and you can be left with the feeling of something fruitless (sorry if I am not able to explain it better but I hope you can understand what I mean). And even if you stop your chapters with a cliffhanger, the readers, in spite of the story left suspended, cannot tell they're not satisfied with ALL the things you put into it ^_-
I liked many parts of it but I am not sure I have understood what you were referring to when you described Mikhail's pains....was he remembering what he had gone through when he got the scares or some other event?

[kajornwan]

I try to compensate for the lateness with volume XD But this one is actually slightly shorter than others, I think by two pages. I'm glad it was long enough to not make readers feel deprived. I understand what you mean, and I'm really glad my chapters are fulfilling. It's really hard to not cut things too short and at the same time not go on and on so it's a big compliment to know that I have somehow accomplish this more or less ^_^ As for the cliffhanger, what can I say, I am a business woman with the need to always keep customers coming back XD This one's not that bad though, right

[angel0399]

Yay!! It warms my heart to know that she's coming back to DC =)

... now if only I could get her to finish Heavy Devotions...