[fic]Retribution Fifteen

[kajornwan]

I promised I would update on Fei Long's birthday, did I do good or not? XD So sorry for the unforgivably late update, but hey, at least I managed to get back into the fandom. I didn't have much time to edit so sorry for all the crappy stuff. I hope you all enjoy and join me wishing Fei a very happy birthday

Comments

Hi

[satsuki82]

you are really trying to kill me, I don't know if i love you or i hate you, i come every single day to see if you have something new and today you make me happy but then i realize that i have to wait for 4 month more and I wanna died.

You are wondeful your job is the best in the world, keep going and I be waiting for you.

i wanna tell you a lot of thing but my english is no enough.

Re: Hi

[kajornwan]

Ouch, sorry T_T I'm so very flattered that you keep checking for updates even though it must feel like a neverending journey. I have such a tight schedule these days but with my newly found love for them and inspiring comment like this, I will have more energy maybe to finish the update faster. I can't promise anything but I'll try. Thank you so much for stopping by!

[shandini]

Hooray. Happy Birthday Fei!

And many thanks for the chapter. :)

[kajornwan]

Thank you for joining us! It's good to see Fei fans together again!

[shandini]

Thank you.
Actually I'm more a FeixYoh fan. But this story with Mikhail is so damn awesome... Wow. You have my full respect for your fantastic work. I really want to read more of it.

[kajornwan]

MxF, YxF, we're all Fei fans ^_^ A part of me is also a YohxFei to the point that I once said if I ever finish CI I might try taking this couple for a long miserable trilogy of their own. And if you know me at all, you'll know that 'misery' is a good word *wipes drool*. I'm glad you are able to open your heart to this pairing too. These two choices are great in a totally different way (FnR aside, of course) and I just pick Mik because, well, the man is more my personal type than Yoh! XD

[alexolgicant]

God, I was in the middle of a conference with Cali office and one of my clients; just because they where arguing about something pointless, I decided to turn on the iPod and by mistake click on Lj app, then here I am.

I am speechless, what can I say, you put everything on words and once again will make me wait for the next one.

You turn them upside down, even made him kiss one of his enemies, and put his heart on display for him to realize how much it matters, I love the scene with Asami, please make him suffer he deserves it; and yes I will sound ridiculous but Tao must kill someone, not Yoh just someone. Feodora is amazing but I still can not believe she can fly that thing; excellent wife, great as a mafia girl and good at cooking but no airplanes please. I am sad about Takaba but he will recover for sure.

Please don't make me wait for so long I know this is worthy but please I beg you.

Happy birthday Fei, Happy new year to you, its so great to have you around. Read you soon!!!!!

[kajornwan]

Another gay porn interference at work! Hallelujah! XDD

I love the scene with Asami, please make him suffer he deserves it;*dies laughing*. Oh I will. I created Feodora monster for this very purpose. *rubs hands* Well, on a serious note, I want Asami to clean up his mess and clear things up with Fei, and there is just no other way to push him than this. I don't want him to go all soft, so somebody has to force him to XD Plus he has to answer to whatever he has done to Fei and Akihito and Mikhail, so yeah, it's not called Retribution for nothing *Evil laugh

[alexolgicant]

Thank you for being so considerate about the update, and as far as you can make Asami suffer, even if that involves Aki; and to let me read that finally Fei make up his mind, Feodora could be Rasputin if you want.

I know that Mikhail must suffer in order to put himself together, and to clear Fei's mind. But once you are done with this I would like to know if you can ask your muse if both of you could get a really long history about what happens with Mikhail at fifteen, you are really good at get into the characters mind and I would like to get that heart breaking part of your history. PLEASE !!!! *begs on her knees* ありがとうございます先生

[kajornwan]

And suffer Asami shall *tugs sleeves drooling*

I actually have been longing to write about Mikhail when he's younger, especially what he's been through with Alexei and Feodora. But while I'm itching to write that nightmare Mikhail suffered, I'm quite scared of it myself >_< both from thinking of the scenes and from fearing that my skills will not quite be able to do it justice. It's a nice challenge though. Perhaps one day soon I will be able to. Thanks for expressing interest though. It's good to know what readers want to read - tickles my muse, you know?

[kajornwan]

Gosh, I forgot to tell you how much I love your icon. Who wouldn't? *nosebleeds*

[kajornwan]

Well, I think at this point most real Fei fans have already forgotten everything about that damn novel, while others probably have chosen to forget Fei altogether T_T

I'm glad you found this minimally edited chapter still intense enough to be enjoyable. And I just want to high five you so much on the stealth plane. I miss writing him that way. It was so refreshing to remember how he used to be all clueless about what normal is ha ha.

Feeling sorry for Takaba is exactly what I wanted to happen. Somebody has to start feeling sorry for the boy because he just doesn't know how to feel sorry for himself after all Asami has put him through. And Asami won't stop this until Takaba starts having a problem with it. It was really intentional to show off how good everyone treats Fei and loves Fei, just to make Aki (and readers) realize that what Asami has been doing for the entire effing manga is just not acceptable as a lover and NO, fuck, NO, pumping yoghurt into someone to fix problems is not called LOVE *yells at grandpa* (<---shit I miss

[noska2891]

I must admit that this story is really wonderful, you get to my heart with every word written.
It was an accident find cruel intentions. When I started reading I could not stop. I must congratulate you have a talent for writing beautiful. Not know how to describe what I feel when I read every chapter ..
thank you very much.

excuse my English is not very good.

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the delay. I've been really busy with work that I keep getting behind on answering comments. Thank you so much for giving it a try and finishing it all. You say your English is not very good, but really, a lot in this comment has touched me deeply and it will be one of those that keep me going. Glad you enjoyed the story! ^_^