[fic]Retribution Fifteen

[kajornwan]

I promised I would update on Fei Long's birthday, did I do good or not? XD So sorry for the unforgivably late update, but hey, at least I managed to get back into the fandom. I didn't have much time to edit so sorry for all the crappy stuff. I hope you all enjoy and join me wishing Fei a very happy birthday

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[delwynmarch]

(Note=Perhaps too much Yoh to my taste XD)

Shush, you :D ! Don't make me track you down and kidnap you and keep you prisoner until Faye's done writing CI >:D

[kajornwan]

LOL Reverse Addams family! You're pretty correct. The entire Arbatov gig is so weird! I enjoyed writing Asami being annihilated so much (and especially by a woman!) It's about time someone tops him (just to make him more human and charming in my eyes)

The "Because my 5th generation is in Moscow,” made me laugh
I thought so. I loved writing that part so much. Missed the sunny Mik. I need to write some short stories on that happy guy again. *hugs Mik*

P.S. Considering what FnR has done to him, I feel such an urgent need to throw Yoh a charity of some sort...so yeah, bear with me. Feel sorry for the guy, will you?

Oh I soooo wanna see action Mik, but actually I wanna see kick-ass Feodora a bit more XDD

[scarlett_bshc07]

WHAT. WHY DID I ONLY FIND OUT ABOUT THIS UPDATE TODAY? 3 FUCKING WEEKS AFTER THE CHAPTER'S BEEN POSTED. Mirage, what the actual fuck have you been doing with your life? This is unforgivable. I can't believe I missed all the action! Now everybody's gone! I don't even know if you'll be able to read this comment. I need a hug. :( No, on second thought, I think I'd rather have a few shots of Jäger since it's been scientifically proven to successfully numb my brain. I'm certain that I'll be torturing myself about this til the next century so might as well get a head start. I'd be having an Armageddon (I heard it's potent as fuck, hence the name) but unfortunately, beer is not my thing. *shrugs*

Anyways, I'll be back to leave a drunken decent comment if I somehow manage not to pass out. Cuz getting royally smashed before midday is how I roll. xD

P.S. IMYSM <3

Xoxo, Mirage

[delwynmarch]

WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN!? *hug-crushes you*

I was thinking of sending you a PM through LJ to tell you about this chapter (i.e. drag you here to squee with us :D ), but I didn't dare, because I figured maybe you'd seen it but just didn't have time to comment or something. I guess next time I'll just go ahead and PM you anyway :P

[scarlett_bshc07]

Oh, you know. Here. There. Everywhere. xD I was in London for the holidays, and then when I came back I've just been busy with the usual stuff. Only, my workload has doubled so bummer. =_=

Yes, you should do that in order to avoid any similar occurrences in the future. If I don't comment, chances are I'm actually unaware that anything has been updated. >__>

And I know that I sort of promised to create a public Twitter account but a certain someone has caught wind of it (how, I can only guess) and disapproved. I'm sorry. :(

[delwynmarch]

Only, my workload has doubled

Ouch. I hope there's a good reason for that? Like, an exciting internship, or new fun classes, or something?

And I know that I sort of promised to create a public Twitter account but a certain someone has caught wind of it (how, I can only guess) and disapproved. I'm sorry. :(

Don't be silly :) First, you didn't actually promise to create that Twitter account; you just said you'd look into it. And second, I hope you know we don't want to get you into troubles!? Given what I understand of your situation, it makes sense that "someone" would want you to keep a low profile on Twitter. Anyway, we can get in touch with you through LJ, so it's not so bad :)

[scarlett_bshc07]

SO. I know I've been MIA for a *insert your adverb of choice since my brain is at the moment incapable of coming up with something that would quite appropriately describe the amount of time I've been gone, because if I'd agreed with what it's provided me with, you'd be seeing a rather unique and fancy variation of the F-word* long while that you guys probably thought I've lost interest (or committed suicide because of the CRAP or decided to go through with my plans of becoming a nun xD) but I'm here to tell you now that my love for Fei Long isn't that shallow. You insult me. I am offended. You should know me better than that (or maybe not since you haven't actually known me for as long as you've known the others LOL). But the point is, I love Fei Long (though the fact that I stupidly missed his birthday might suggest otherwise), and though my treacherous eyes may wander from time to time (because, well...I'll be honest and say that I've been slowly re-acquainting myself with the Tolkien fandom and you can blame The Hobbit for that),

[kajornwan]

LOL Don't be offended, I count myself as one of the most dedicated Fei fan in the world (after char_comet XD) and if writing the longest fic in the VF universe for 6 year straight and still going isn't enough to convince you, then I don't know what would. My point is, yes, even *I* forgot Fei's birthday. That piece of crap called FnR that deserves to be printed on nothing but 50 shades recycled paper has managed to make me forget Fei's birthday, (of course, being the pinnacle of Fei fan that she is, char_comet reminded me). And if someone like me can forget Fei's birthday, then what is to keep Fei fans of the world staying around, especially when there's probably never going to be Fei in the manga again and Mikhail is officially dead? Anyway, you get my point. But I'm glad your love for him is still strong. As sick as we all are, I'm sure we have plenty of ways to play with him for centuries to come XD, while his creator has fun with Asami's pumping brainwashing Yogurt into Aki for the nth time because, hey, who ever gets bored of

[scarlett_bshc07]

Cont.

YOH. Well, I guess Del will be happy to know that I'm really starting to grow fond of him, mostly because of how you've characterized him (so again, it all goes to you). The fact that he's willing to cooperate with the man he lost the object of his undying love and affection to (and basically being such a good sport about it) is really admirable and says a lot about his devotion to Fei. It takes a real man to be able to do what he did. To step back and accept the reality that his love would never be returned, and yet still love Fei enough to risk so much, even his life. And I love how he sort of came to the realization that he is to Fei Long as Feodora is to Mikhail. So really, they should totes get together ASAP. I'm all aboard the Feodora/Yoh ship. And yes, Feodora is dominant. xD

MIKHAIL. WHAT IS OXYGEN AND WHERE CAN I BUY IT? BECAUSE JFC I CAN'T. This is all your fault, woman. Why did you have to make him so fucking perfect? I have literally evaporated and I am demanding that you send me an AC so I could at least

[delwynmarch]

YOH. Well, I guess Del will be happy to know that I'm really starting to grow fond of him, mostly because of how you've characterized him (so again, it all goes to you).

The leader of the MikxFei Tribe is the one converting people to the awesomeness of Yoh's character... Something is deeply amiss in the VF fandom, and that's wonderful :D !

The fact that he's willing to cooperate with the man he lost the object of his undying love and affection to (and basically being such a good sport about it) is really admirable and says a lot about his devotion to Fei. It takes a real man to be able to do what he did. To step back and accept the reality that his love would never be returned, and yet still love Fei enough to risk so much, even his life

May I point out that he already did all of this in canon (hence why I love him so much)? Except of course in canon, it wasn't so much "love for Mikhail" than "obsession over Asami", but the principle remains the same.

And I love how he sort of came to the realization that he is to Fei Long as

[kajornwan]

The leader of the MikxFei Tribe is the one converting people to the awesomeness of Yoh's characterT_T Why can't the other side do the same thing for Mik too? *sighs

[kajornwan]

Yoh - I agree with Del that Yoh has always been all this, and I have always seen him as capable of doing all this, only YA has always given us only bits and pieces of it and let us wonder among ourselves what was going on behind that mask. I've always been a hardcore MikxFei but I've always loved the side of Yoh's story (and I wouldn't have hated him so much at one point, a long time ago, had his fans not attack Mikhail so relentlessly). It's such a pity he was never brought to his potential, even when he had the golden chance of being Fei's man in canon (ok not cannon in our opinion XD). I'm glad I managed to make Mik fans like him, if only to make YohxFei fans become more mature and stop bashing him. But I guess now I don't have to worry, because Fei fans on both sides have all disappeared XD Mostly anyway

where are you?

[satsuki82]

o please, somebody kill me, because i gonna die if you don't put a new chapter

Re: where are you?

[kajornwan]

Sorry >_< Work is really killing me at the moment. I'll try to wake up early or something.

Re: where are you?

[kajornwan]

I'm so sorry for being gone for so long. I'll try to find time to write asap. Right now work is not even letting me sleep T_T