[fic] Retribution Sixteen

[kajornwan]

I'm so so so very sorry for the lateness of this chapter. Work has really been killing me due to a sudden shortage of staff. I swear I had to write this while on the elliptical because I had no other time. Also sorry if it sucks or not up to my usual standard. While I wasn't in a rush, I didn't really have time to edit and rewrite like usual. Other

Comments

[angel0399]

When I read this over, I seriously lol'ed when Fei told Yoh why would they let a pregnant woman fly the jet. Seriously... who was suppose to tell her no? Lol! That woman does whatever she wants, when she wants it.

[kajornwan]

XD I kinda want to see Fei try. Perhaps in a sequel of some sort eh? I can so see Mikhail wanting to jump off a cliff over these two.

[angel0399]

Well if you're gonna write a sequel of sorts, I'd wanna see Del's idea ;-)

[kajornwan]

Del's idea? FeoxYoh? XD

[shandini]

Wow. This chapter is really awesome. I love it. Thank you so much. <3

And which way you go is up to you. I mean you can do whatever you want. When you want to write only two or three new chapters it is ok. It is your fic. And it is important if you can be satisfied with a sudden ending. Listen to your heart. When your heart tells you to write the story a year longer then do it. :)
I will wait. I will wait a year for the end of this fic. And I can wait for fic with Yoh and Fei. I love all your stories. So no matter what you do. I will read it. I will be happy and I will love it.

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much for stopping by and for still waiting. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I kind of like both the long and short way to go actually. I'll get to move on to something happier if I go for short, but I get to write the angsty scenes till my bones ache if I go for the long one. Now I'm inclined on short because I'm stressed but we'll see. Thank you for the support.

[shandini]

Ok honey. Let me tell you something: If you're too stressed there will nothing good come out of it. Just take you time. There are people who work better under stress. But too much stress harms only the creativity. So please take it easy. No one rushes you.

[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

That did sound like a horrible day (no internet is horrible). I'm glad this cheered you up!

[char_comet]

It's a great chapter as always and your writer's skill hasn't diminished at all! :-P
About the short or long way to finish the fic, I'll tell you that I'd like to get such beautiful and intense stories to read for dozens years to come, but I have also to confess you that lately I've become even more disturbed by the torture/beating/rapes/murders scenes (because of the violence surrounding us everywhere everyday in the world) that I don't know if I could enjoy this your story for dozens years if it continues to be so full of anguish and beatings (even if it's just a fic and not the reality) :-P

[kajornwan]

Thanks Terry for still reading even though the content makes you stress even more *hugs*. What can I say? You know me. I love drama and tragedy. But I'm also beginning to agree with you as my life is so stressful lately and I can use something happy too. We'll see. It's good to see you. I've missed all the fangirling so bad but there's just isn't much to fangirl about anymore *bummer*

[kajornwan]

LOL Thank you for still reading!