[fic] Retribution Sixteen

[kajornwan]

I'm so so so very sorry for the lateness of this chapter. Work has really been killing me due to a sudden shortage of staff. I swear I had to write this while on the elliptical because I had no other time. Also sorry if it sucks or not up to my usual standard. While I wasn't in a rush, I didn't really have time to edit and rewrite like usual. Other

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[kajornwan]

Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed it! I've been wanting (and fearing) to write badass Fei forever and always thought I would not be able to pull it off. It was so much fun though. I was worried that all the comic relief will seem out of place actually. But I couldn't help it. I'm stressed right now so I wanted to write something a bit more cheerful.

Thanks for the support. As of now I just want to end all this suffering and move on to something fluffy just to heal my own fatigue but we'll see!

[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

Gosh I can't tell you how much I appreciate the fact that you like the domesticated Feodora and Mikhail with Yoh in the background. I lived imagining a morning like that. And i'm also glad you find Fei cute. I think it's time he shows his sunny side. Can't wait to put him and Mikhail back together again.

To tell you the truth I kind of fucked up on the pregnancy thing, as in I forgot I wanted to save it for later. But it was still going to be no angst so I've not really changed the plot much. You'll see. Fei at this point is not going to angst over anything ever again. I think he has grown a lot and sees the big picture now which is the whole point of the story.

Oh I can go the short way and extend the fluffy part XD I don't know. I'll see if I still feel the need to write so much angst. Thanks for the support though *hugs*

[zsuzsapo]

[kajornwan]

Aww, home renovation is fun! And i'm glad you got your computer back. I couldn't help it with the cinnamon roll thing. I love Cinnabon and as I'm on a diet I can't have any. *cries* But WOW you made egg tarts! Isn't that something really hard to make? I'm so proud of you (and am now hungry!). A reader once told me we should make a self-help guide "Arbatov 101", now I suppose I have to compile an Arbatov(a) cookbook as well :D Actually I want Mikhail's rosemary roasted rack of lamb *drools*

I have to say that Yoh xFeodora do have quite a chemistry. I plan to write more of them within Retribution already. As for the future, I'm giggling right now over Fei and Yoh getting together to give the Arbatov(a) some kind of hell XDDD

[freakish88]

Hello there :) I just reread again the whole story AND it never failed to amaze me XDDD This chapter just make me wow and lol. . . XDD

[kajornwan]

Sorry for the late reply. Work is still taking most of my time. But thank you so much for stopping by to let me know you still enjoy this story. I'm very flattered that you went back to read it all over again! It's probably every author's dream to know their readers read their story more than once.

I'm miserable too though *sighs* It was so much fun back then that I still don't want it to stop. It's also such a pity that YA doesn't realize how much potential this couple has, and because I'm mad about this I am going to continue as long as there's still people loving this pairing! Thanks again for the support!

[erafinn29]

Yay badass Fei! =D Fei and Yoh make a pretty good team. :D It's awesome that you wrote some action in this chapter!

It makes me so happy that you continue this great story. ^^ I will stick with you no matter how you are going to end it. Either way it's going to be awesome because you are a skilled writer. ;)

[kajornwan]

Badass Fei and Yoh (with stick removed from butt) are hawt! *gets bricked by Mikhail* Meh, while I love MikxFei to death, I can't deny the potential of YohxFei done right. Glad you like the action. I was pretty sure I suck at action scenes so that was a relief. Thank you so much for the support. I will try to do my best.

[delwynmarch]

Okay, so... *Takes deep breath and jumps in

[kajornwan]

Gosh it's good to see you here. Brings back memories, you know? *hugs* I miss taking to you guys so much. Ever since that damn novel things have been sort of dead in the Fei fandom when there should be at least a TON of YohxFei stuff. T_T

I'm glad you appreciate that domestic scene. I think that was the result of me on a diet in desperate need of a Cinnabon, but imagining the three in that kitchen makes me smile a lot. Although I have a feeling that's a scene best understood by married readers XD

Fei Long and Yoh working as a team: ROWR
ROWRs too. Wouldn't you just love to see the two of them take back Baishe the first time? I kept thinking of scenes when Yoh slowly gained Fei's trust, especially when Fei just got out of jail and was not yet the Baishe leader. They must have been a great partner then. Yoh xFei chemistry in jail and during a fight *drools* That is some hot @#$% you need to get back to writing!

I wouldn't even mind one bit if you ended up killing Yoh offLOL I have a thing for an amazing death of a character (which

[angel0399]

And as your beta, I can't believe I didn't catch the whole pregnant thing. Shame on me!