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kajornwan

[fic] Retribution Sixteen

Jun 15, 2013 07:27

I'm so so so very sorry for the lateness of this chapter. Work has really been killing me due to a sudden shortage of staff. I swear I had to write this while on the elliptical because I had no other time. Also sorry if it sucks or not up to my usual standard. While I wasn't in a rush, I didn't really have time to edit and rewrite like usual. Other ( Read more... )

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gizalisas June 24 2013, 22:57:46 UTC

Hi, finally I found a moment to write something.Lately, I hardly have the time to open my mac,but when I do,your LJ is the first thing I check to look for a new chapter. I'm sorry if I don't always leave a comment, but be sure I didn't miss a single word of this fic,and waiting between one chapter and the other I began to reread CI again (....just to keep me trained)
By the way,beautiful Yoh>

kajornwan July 5 2013, 02:54:01 UTC

Thank you so much for stopping by to comment and sorry for the late reply. my work hours are making life difficult for me these days. I'm always very flattered to hear that people reread the stories *_* so thank you for that. I have started the next one and I hope to be able to update sooner. Hopefully some of you are still here.

kissweiss June 25 2013, 13:39:43 UTC

Thank you for the new chapter!!Feodora is always so reliable whenever she is with Mickhail.The family Arbatov ,the father and Feodora ,in some way,may be who Mick cares most in the world after he lost Alexei.Well he has gone so far for Fei that he may lose his family，that all he was left ! Feodora`s words make me so moved that I wonder can Fei give him more than that. Fei will save Mick this time right!?

kajornwan July 5 2013, 02:59:09 UTC

My reply is unforgivably late due to my work load but here I am ^_^ Thank you so much for your continued support. I'm glad you like the Feodora part and picked up on how important she is for Mikhail. I don't think Fei will ever be able to give him what Feodora can but Feodora also can't give him what Fei can, much like Fei that has both Yoh and Mikhail who mattered to him in a totally different way. And yes, I think it's time Fei rescues his lover. Hope to update quicker next chapter as i've started already. See you then *hugs*

alexolgicant July 8 2013, 14:05:20 UTC

i am so sorry i did not comment anything, but i spend my summer holidays in Japan an i read it over there but i was unable to answer ti yiyr question.

Pleasee make it unbearably long as your can, i realy love the way you are doing so far and i can imagine this will end pretty good, if you dont feel like or you are not in the mood i imagie you will finish it, but i hope you will not.let me down.

please keep with your wonderfull work and take your time I promise to wait until the end.

But please dont kill feodora or yoh i like them already and i still feel sorry for alexei. And please no mearcy for Mik, Fei will have to prove how much he loves him and how far he will go for love!!!

Thank you and Keep going! ,

kajornwan August 1 2013, 00:12:27 UTC

I'm sorry I just got here to reply T_T But lucky you for being able to spend your summer in Japan! You must have enjoyed it immensely! I missed Japan a lot.

Pleasee make it unbearably long as your can
LOL I'll talk to my muse, see what she says XD But it's very flattering to know you don't want it to end! Thank you.

I still feel sorry for Alexei myself *cries*

Thanks for stopping by and hope to be able to update soon.

yuuka_chan July 10 2013, 17:01:29 UTC

*releases breath* ...so intense! goodness, i'm still rendered speechless. oh boy what to say...just that i love each and every scene in this chapter. and that i love the tagteam fei x yoh scene to bits. and that i can't wait for the next one (that cliffy >o<)

*sigh* this is a perfect read to end my day. i shall dream of wonderful mikFei moments <3 thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!! i can't thank you enough!

<3 yuuka ( ... )

kajornwan August 1 2013, 00:19:05 UTC

Hi there, sorry for my late reply. ^^! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I was kind of worry that it might not be well written enough as I spent much less time editing. Glad you like the FeixYoh duo. I have always wanted to see them work together in action. We're kind of deprived of that in the manga T_T

Thank you for wanting to keep reading and sticking with me even if it takes me 2-3 years to finish. I will talk to my muse and see what she says. But even if this has to end early, I will probably be posting originals here later and I hope that will be as satisfactory to read. For readers that have been staying with me through and through here, I think it's only fair that I share it ^_^ What am I writing? A fantasy with loads of hot bishies (of course) lol

Thanks for stopping by. You made my day too.

Philip Toh is on my to die list. unyieldingheart July 27 2013, 21:00:30 UTC

/sobs ( ... )

Re: Philip Toh is on my to die list. kajornwan August 1 2013, 00:35:27 UTC

I'm a bit late but her eI am ^_^

First of all, thank you so much for going through creating an account to let me know how much you like the story. I'm always very grateful to find new readers finishing the entire trilogy. That's a lot of stuff to read!!

Second, I have always loved lengthy comments, and this brings back memories when people were still very much into VF and Fei in general. It's so refreshing! I think everyone started out as AsamixFei (me too) but I guess we have to make do when that can't really happen. I ended up liking Mikhail much more than Asami anyway. He's so different from Fei and together they complete the jigsaw puzzle I think.

Oh the Fei/Yoh thing, I don't particular like this pairing, but I don't think anyone can deny that they have a really good story of their own. Yoh betraying Fei was a really phenomenal invitation to write some really depressing *yum* and make up scenes that I just have to do it. And I'm glad you are able to find some of these scenes enjoyable.

Also, I want to punch Asami whenever ( ... )