[fic] Retribution Sixteen

[kajornwan]

I'm so so so very sorry for the lateness of this chapter. Work has really been killing me due to a sudden shortage of staff. I swear I had to write this while on the elliptical because I had no other time. Also sorry if it sucks or not up to my usual standard. While I wasn't in a rush, I didn't really have time to edit and rewrite like usual. Other

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[kajornwan]

Hi, I'm so unforgivably late in my reply, but please know that I had every intention to do so only my life doesn't give me that time of day unless I kicked it real hard!

Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me such an inspiring comment on how you enjoyed exactly the scenes I enjoyed most! I also have a thing for unimaginable villains *hi five* and boy it was so much fun to make Toh that evil.

Please don't say you're a stranger or worry about giving me your two-cents. Think of this as work that I don't get paid with money, I get paid with comments, especially ones that help me grow as a writer (which includes bad ones). So please feel free to criticize or tell me what you like so I know where I hit or miss. I also am eternally grateful for long comments, so fire away if you feel like ranting or anything at all. XD

I will try to update as soon as life permits. It's half finished, the next chapter. I hope to see you there. Long ending or short ending, I'll talk to my muse again ^_^

[bbly]

Great details, nicely written, as always. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Do you know that I have re-read all your stories several times? That's how much I love your writing. ;-)

[kajornwan]

Thank you so much! That makes it worth the effort and it makes my day every time I hear that my chapters wre read more than once. *_* So thanks for letting me know this as well.

[anonymous]

(I’m a total lurker, so I don’t comment often, eheheh

[kajornwan]

For someone who doesn't comment often, it's an honor to recieve this comment indeed! I would have to agree with on AxA ..um..relationship and also that the only people I read VF for are Fei Long, Mikhail and Yoh. And you should have seen me throw an epic tantrum at that shit ending because I couldn't possibly put all those disappointment into English words. This pairing really isn't that rare though. During NT there were a lot of MxF fics and fanart but if you conpared it to AxA stuff, they're pretty rare, yes =_=. Now though Fei Long has almost ceased to exist in the fandom due to the infamous 3some, then the novel (which managed to piss off MxF fans, disappoint YxF fans, and shota-ed a lot of of ppl out of the fandom completely w/ FxTao all at the same time.) It's not a good period for Fei but I love this pairing too much to abandon them, even though I have to say I've pretty much gave up on hoping thier creator can or even want to do them justice in the future. =_

hi

[anonymous]

please tell me you will not leave us waiting for six months again, I miss Fei

Re: hi

[kajornwan]

New update is coming soon as I've just finished it.. Sorry it takes so long T_T

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