[fic] Retribution Eighteen

[kajornwan]

I've wasted enough time not updating, and for that I deserve every brick, so without further ramblings, here it is, an update. Enjoy throwing tomatoes at me Title: Retribution Eighteen

Comments

[shandini]

Thank you very very very much.... But now I have to read it all again. I think I have lost the thread. >_<

I really really love this chapter. But it is so hard to find the right words to describe my feelings. I mean I am not such a big MxF fan but this hurts really much.
Somehow I hope this words are just a joke. Mikhail is the type of guy who would make such a macabre joke just to regret it in the other second. Or I hope so. Well, I will see what you have planned for them. And remember. I have something here what is worse than tomates... cotton balls! And I will use them!

Waaw. Finally Yoh understand what an idiot he was. -_- A bit too late. I don't know what hurts me most: A Mikhail who can't recognize his true love or a Yoh who now understands what he has lost/missed...

[kajornwan]

Thank you for stopping by to read and comment after such a long hiatus. I just hope the reason you couldn't find words to describe was not due to this being so disappointing in some ways, or that I have bored you to death ^^! And while I'm sorry to hear that you're not a big MxF fan, I am relieved that it hurts to read *gets bricked*. Well that was the point of this chapter, pain, pain and more pain. As for whether it was a joke, I can't really give that away. But one thing I can promise, os that Mikhail is very much himself, with or without those memories and I was very glad to be able to write him as his normal self again before I end this story

[shandini]

As always I love this chapter. Yeeeeah, I know. I'm not a big MxF fan, but I love your Mikhail and Fei a lot. If the 'real' Mik would be this way it would not be a problem for me to see Fei in his arms. But the real Mik is... ok, I do love your Mik. I would kill to get such a man in my life. xD

[kajornwan]

You're a YohxFei then? I'm always so flattered when I can get a Yoh x Fei to read this and open her heart to Mikhail, even if it's just in my writing. I happen to think there's really no real Mik to judge though. We only saw the tip of the iceberg and now he's gone with the wind. Although, I don't think YA had ever intended Mikhail to be this dark and insane either LOL

I don't know if I should hate it or love it.
Ah I get what you mean, even though I don't share the same problem. Anything that manages to hurt me I love with a passion, especially tragic endings (why I love Shakespeare and Greek tragedy!).

And for me it doesn't matter if it is a story about Mik and Fei, Asami and Fei or something with your own characters
That is such a relief and one of the best things a writer would want to hear. I keep worrying that MikxFei is the only thing I can write about, and it is making me anxious as hell when I write my original. Thank you for giving me a push and I hope I do not disappoint in the future.

I think Fei is someone who will

[freakish88]

LOL. Enough with Asami and Akihito (AxA have more spotlight than MxF -sighs-) because my love is for Mikhail and Fei Long!!! *grins*

Th-This chapter hurts so much *wails* WHYY!!! WHYYY at the end of this chapter you wrote it like that?? You such a bully *cries* Wishing that the final chapter is a happy ending *shots a glare :p* Anyway, I really do enjoy the chapter XD!!! Actually I reread the whole chapters starting from CI *nods* It took almost four days for me to read the whole thing. This fandom NEVER bores me!!! :3 *typing while eating her cookies*

I'm looking forward the grand finale of CI and also Paradise Day :3 Thank you so muchhhhhhhh *hugs*

P/s; I also looking forward to read more of this fandom from you in the future. Hope you don't mind to write again and more :D. We're lacking in the name of love from this pair. Hahahaha. I'll be waiting even though it takes 6 months or years for you to write again. BUT please do write more of this fandom *puppy eyes, hugs* Once again, thank you!!!

[kajornwan]

LOL while I agree with all my heart about AxA part, I should tell you that I was going to end the story on this chapter and then I realize, "shit, I can't leave AxA rotting in their cells" (even though now that you put it that way, I actually could coz most people wouldn't give a damn if they do), and so I went back to tie up that loose ends, because I don't want to be one of those writers who leave their loose ends hanging. Besides, I had pulled them into this to teach them a lesson at being in a proper relationship and for Fei Long to see AxA as they are - an utterly dysfunctional couple that is never going to work in RL, and that Asami has nothing on Mikhail in that department, allowing him to make the clean break needed and dump him shaking his head, "what the fuck was I thinking? " but I suppose I could have made it a bit shorter XD

[mean_green_ogre]

ARRRRRR! Silly Livejournal! That wasn't meant to be anonymous, lol! So once again, properly

[kajornwan]

(I do it all the time, the anonymous thing. Who has time to login when you have something to say? ^_

[anonymous]

Oh thank you so much for updating this chapter! While I hate to see the story end, I also want a happy ending for Mik and Fei. Please tell me that it will be a happy ending!

I look forward to your oneshots in the future. I will surely miss this couple. Again, thanks to you for giving us these wonderful stories which are now part of us.

I wonder how I can write stories like these myself!

[kajornwan]

Hi. Thank you for stopping by to comment, and sorry it has to end so soon. I can't reveal right now if the ending will be happy or not, but at least they're alive (even though I wish very much I could kill one of them and cry over it for years *is sick*). That is a happy ending for me. I usually kill somebody at the end. ^^! But I'm very happy to hear that you have enjoyed this story and I hope that it will inspire you to write one of your own one day (and please let it be MxF because I am so deprived!! *cries*)

Oh there will be one shots, when is the question. T_T

[anonymous]

Oh no, please don't tell me that after all those cheesy but straight from the heart lines of mik (which leaves me wanting to hear them from someone myself especially "my life begins with you."), he's just gonna forget everything? make fei long suffer by making him say those lines himself!! :)

here's an idea: if you're gonna make mik forget, then you'll have to write another 19-chapter long sequel which consists of fei making mik remember! haha.

[char_comet]

This is such an emotional chapter!! But actually the whole story is so intense and every chapter doesn't fail to catch our attention and long for the next! ^_-
Thank you for all this huge work! I hope you won't stop to write of them at least in some other story! ^_^

[kajornwan]

Thank you ^_^ I'm glad it was emotional as I have wanted it to be. But most of all it's good to see you here *hugs*