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kajornwan

[fic]Retribution Epilogue

May 14, 2014 02:14

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've ( Read more... )

Comments 38

shandini May 13 2014, 20:46:10 UTC

Ok, this was somehow... unsatisfying. xD I hate open ends. But I think it is the perfect end. A few questions are still unanswered. Will he ever remember? I love this kind of drama. It's so wonderful. It is not cheesy or something. Kyyyaaa, I am speechless. xD

And you know because it is such a perfect story I will always bug you to make a (little) YxF thing! Beware! Do more!

kajornwan May 15 2014, 09:21:11 UTC

What do you mean open ends? This actually closes a perfect infinite loop *gets shot*. TBH I don't believe in happily ever after endings, they are so finished and so ready to move out of your mind not to mention unrealistic. I'd like to leave them knowing there will be so many more fights they have to survive with each other and so many more obstacles but the point of this epilogue is that Mikhail will always be Mikhail. He fucking has no choice but to love Fei again and again even if he loses his memory another 10 times, and he will never quit on Fei, ever. That's as happy as it gets for endings IMO. And Fei is really the luckiest bastard in the world because he's going to get to relive everything twice. Who gets a chance like that ( ... )

shandini May 15 2014, 10:08:41 UTC

Somehow it is an open end because it can still come more. And I am happy about that. Because a definitve end would end with something like "And they both died happy in their rocking chairs"
So it is the best end for this story... But I am looking forward to your one shots. xD

I think if he remembers he will do all the crazy stuff he always wanted to do with Fei... at once.

Seems so. Give the fans some time. I mean this is the end. It is really hard to find in such a moment the right words.

That sounds good. I am looking forward to it and will wait right here. :)

zsuzsapo May 13 2014, 21:27:52 UTC

kajornwan May 15 2014, 09:32:07 UTC

Thank you for staying with me till the very end. LOL FeoxYoh will probably be written in a few one shots one day.

I totally understand feeling bad about Mikhail having lost his memories, but let's face it, Mikhail will always be Mikhail and I believe he will do it all over again. It's his true personality. He's someone who always moves forward with no regrets, and that is perfect for Fei because with him, Fei will always be reminded that everything will be ok as long as they're alive and together. I do believe his memories will return and I have a lot of fun imagining the moments when it returns to him little by little. It would have been really sweet.

Glad you liked the scene with Fei and Feodora. I liked them too, talking like this. I will try to write more of them give that my original allows. I struggle doing two universes at the same time. Thank you again for taking your time to comment. I really appreciate it.

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kajornwan May 15 2014, 09:37:17 UTC

Thank you so much for understanding and appreciating what I was trying to write. That one sentence from Mikhail is actually the whole point of him losing his memory really. It is his last great proclamation of unbreakable love for Fei, that as long as he remains himself, he has no choice whatsoever but to love Fei all over again. And you are so right, it is genuinely MikxFei and this is a happy ending!

Oh that last sentence is supposed to close this into an infinite loop for you to read them forever!!! XD

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kajornwan May 15 2014, 09:43:14 UTC

It is, unfortunately, unless of course the few hundreds of Fei fans would be resurrected and demand him again which I don't think is likely to happen. Don't get me wrong, I will still write then from time to time, but a whole other arc for CI will drain me close to death which is not wise if there are 2 people reading and considering I have an original to pursue. Thank you so much though for being here till the end. I truly appreciate it.

anonymous July 22 2014, 09:22:13 UTC

Dear Faye,
I don't know how to start with my comment, cause I'm really exited right now, when reading "2 people reading". I have found your fanfic two weeks ago and I cannot find any sleep anymore. I wont even find any words how much I enjoyed your storys. You were able to heal a few dissapointed feelings I had when I read viewfi der (I wished it would continue with Feilong and Mikael), whose mangabooks I' ve bought in the last weeks, cause I know viewfinder at all even for a few weeks) You ll hear from me, cause I've already started to draw something to your story of cruel intensions. What I wanted to say: there will be always fans of your storys in the Future!!!!!!!!!!!! I even didn't know anything about viewfinder before may 2014, I even had no contact with mangas at all. I've just discouvered yours two weeks ago and it changed my life and my thoughts radically (cannot stop thinking about mikael and feilong). Soo many hugs S

kajornwan August 2 2014, 23:47:50 UTC

Hi. Sorry for the late reply. Thank you so much for stopping by to tell me you have enjoyed these so much. I also have no words to express my gratitude to hear that it has affected your sleep XD Well, that is something better than being paid to know your writing has such a dramatic effect!

I think I would always continue with MikxFei. My relationship with this pairing is beyond obsession. Only now I'm a little occupied with more challenges but I will probably come back to them from time to time.

And OMG I would totally love to see you draw something of them! The world is so MikxFei deprived you will be doing everyone a favor really! Anyway, welcome to my lj and VF!

So many hugsssss too

char_comet May 14 2014, 20:06:33 UTC

Sigh...so sad to see this coming to an end, after many years and chapters of such a fascinating story you've been able to write!!!! =_=
It killed me the way how you made Mikhail tell Fei Long the I loved you, didn’t I? and then I will love you all over againBut...but... Why did you skip the smexy part? How could you do this to us ( ... )

kajornwan May 15 2014, 10:16:28 UTC

Thank you for being here without fail, Terry. You have no idea how your presence has pushed me this far. I'm feeling both lost and sad to end this. Me most of all as a writer who has bonded with this for 7 years. But I fear continuing would be dragging this somewhere downwards. You know like TV series that came out one season too many XD ( ... )