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kajornwan

[fic]Retribution Epilogue

May 14, 2014 02:14

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've ( Read more... )

Comments 38

hirata30 May 14 2014, 20:09:45 UTC

I don't know what to say. Although I never left any comment (maybe once) here, I always read your story. I don't even remember when I started it but I fell in love with it immediately. I loved the way you played with the characters and shaped the story. I got to like your fictional characters as much as I loved the original characters.
I'm sad that these were the last two chapters but I was also curious about the end. It was a little bit heartbroken and nostalgic but I enjoyed every moment of it. I'm still speechless, so I don't know what else to do than to thank you for your hard and fantastic work!!!

kajornwan May 15 2014, 10:29:01 UTC

LOL No one seems to know what to say at the ending. This is sort of weird to me but also because I have never finished a story before. Believe me I'm the one most affected because now I feel like I no longer have a goal and must find new ones. But thank you so much for letting me know that you have enjoyed this and that I hadn't messed up the ending even though they made you sad. It was an ending that was meant to last and give you that nostalgic feeling so if you're feeling it, there's no more flattery better than this. I hope to be able to bring you more of this pairing and also that my original story will not disappoint if you ever give it a try! See you around!

worth the wait anonymous May 16 2014, 17:25:12 UTC

i discovered this fic only fairly recently, and so i commented only on chap 17 this year i guess (the still waiting if you're still willing post ( ... )

Re: worth the wait kajornwan May 17 2014, 04:39:34 UTC

Oh you! I will have you know that yours was one of the comments that gave my muse a kick in the butt and got me writing CI again! So thank you so much for not allowing me to leave this unfinished till the next century!

i completely agree with you in ending this now instead of wringing the plot dry until nothing worthy can be produced anymore
I'm glad you understand. I've written them so much that in these last two chapters I had to delete some of the things I wrote because I've forgotten that I'd written it! Can you imagine. It's been too long I can't even remember my own story. Luckily my beta has done a CI triathlon 5 times and remembers those details *hugs her* I do daydream about them after this a lot though so if I even have time or when I get stuck with Obsidian I can probably get something done.

to be honest chapter 19 was quite hard for me to readI understand and it was supposed to be hard to read. So if it felt suffocating (as opposed to boring) then I'll take that as mission accomplished. I usually don't believe in happy ( ... )

anonymous May 17 2014, 16:43:32 UTC

I survived 19 and got the real end! I would first say sorry that it is difficult for me to understand Mic's remember love by heart and body.And he hasn't taken his memories back! ! It is fascinate for him to be in love with Fei again,but can they really do it again I am not sure ( ... )

kissweiss May 17 2014, 16:48:25 UTC

the comment above is mine, appreciate for your story again!

kajornwan May 21 2014, 03:02:21 UTC

I survived 19
LOL Thank God. That is great to hear though. 19 was supposed to be hard to read. As for Mikhail, Fei is like a habit to him now. I have a feeling those who lose their memory probably still remember the need to smoke if they were chain smokers XD But I don't know. This is fan fiction anyway, right XDD

The memories with Feilong would have been a part of Mic's life and the craziness for Fei I think.That's very true in some aspects. To me though, that line of thinking is more like YohxFei. Their's is a kind of love that grows with time and the bond between YxF is forged from the experience they shared and endured together. Mikhail's obsession with Fei, at least as far as CI universe goes, was very abrupt. I guess you could say that he was smacked right in the head and he never recovered, so generally, no matter how many times Mikhail reboots, he is destined to fall head over heels for Fei all over again, and being the persistent bastard and a spoiled brat that he is, yes, I do believe he can do it all over again. It is ( ... )

anonymous May 18 2014, 16:48:57 UTC

Hi ( ... )

kajornwan May 21 2014, 03:09:52 UTC

Hi Diane,

Thank you so much for letting me know this. After seven years it does help to know my efforts have not been wasted and that this was appreciated. I'm so very happy to hear you love the Arbatovs. The relationship between Mikhail and Alexei was among my most favorite things to write. It makes Mikhail feel so real in the process, and yes, I do agree with you everyday on wanting someone to love me like Mikhail loves Fei. Oh well, at least in fiction men like that have to exist LOL As for Alexei, I can tell you right now I am still not over him, and I have never really forgiven myself even though I knew it was necessary, that I had killed Alexei.

Ah! Glad you see it as I do, a happy ending!!!

I think your favorite one shots as also my favorites. The third would probably be February First. ^_^

Thank you so much for being here and letting me know this. I will try to write more of them whenever I can.

P.S. I'm Thai and English is really my second language. Your English does not suck!