[fic]Retribution Epilogue

[kajornwan]

Title: Retribution Epilogue
Rating: NC-17 (just to be safe but please don't get your hopes up)
Warning: angst and possible risk of cavities.
Characters: Fei Long, Mikhail.
Spoiler: None
Disclaimer: All VF characters belong to Yamane Ayano.
Beta: angel0399Previous Chapters: For new readers, 'Retribution' is the third arc of a Mik x Fei trilogy that I've

Comments

[tradij]

I didn't have the time to read to read your story for a long time, and I did a lot of catching up this morning

[kajornwan]

Oh you're still here! It's so good to see one of the earliest readers back at the epilogue. I'm glad you came back. *hugs*

Seriously, after finishing chapter 19 I felt like punching someone
*Cries tears of joy* That is precisely what I wanted readers to feel. I'm so very flattered!

Now, in one single epilogue, you managed to save everything,I'm glad you saw it that way. It was meant to be a very emotional moment, one last proclamation of love from Mikhail that sets this in stone, proving once and for all that they will never fail as a couple because Mikhail won't allow it. And I think that's the best possible happy ending to a love story. I'm happy that you understand why it ends here and why I won't be writing that part when he remembers, but I will probably write one shots here and there because I'd miss them too much to not do it

[kajornwan]

I do hope I have said talent to get me through whatever I need to write after this. Hearing such encouragement does help a lot to get me going. So thank you so much for this. What more could a writer ask for on her birthday but a beautiful comment? ^_^

Asami and Fei's interaction in Chapter 18, and Misha's memory loss. You may be the only one who liked that part LOL I felt that I needed to write Asami x Fei interaction for the last time, for that clean break even though it took a lot of energy and a lot of space that should have been MikxFei, and I'm glad you didn't mind them ^_^ Mikhail's memory loss was necessary for this Epilogue, as you can see, and I may have written it especially to make this happen *ducks brick*. But I need Mikhail to make this statement, that no matter what happens he won't fail Fei Long, he won't give up, and he won't back down because that is who Mikhail is

[alexolgicant]

I must say sorry,  I did not posted anything earlier but you made me cry. it was so cute and sweet. i would like it to keep going but you are the one who decide that. Anyway thanks for all those years and histories. i love them all. and enjoyed them to no end.

You create a new couple (with existing characters) but gave them life beyond the manga. It is great the way you put your history together along with the original story and where able to fill the blanks.

Needless to say that  i am your fan, i would like to be able to do it and to be brave enough to publish it. Congratulations once more and please have mercy and try to write a little bit more about them because even if i read the whole thing once more i am still waiting for more

[kajornwan]

I must say sorry, I did not posted anything earlier but you made me cry.
I don't want to say this but the ability to make you feel like crying counts as a trophy. So thank you for that. And I thought it was because of no notification that most people don't comment right away as usual. You guys are in denial !? LOL I get it though. I am very much in denial, like now I don't know what to write!! But I am writing something of them at the moment. I hope it will be good enough to take a little of the agony away from this ending. Thank you for being here till the end. I truly appreciate it. *hugs*

[jamie310]

Bravo!!!!!

[kajornwan]

Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it.

[jamie310]

Oh, l ' m sorry,
I wrote my comment between the comments from May 2014 (first time posting something somewhere, sorry. . . )
I wanted to add: beside readers, who will discouver this in the future (like me, who discouvered your fic and viewfinder itself during the last weeks, althrough yours is written in 2011), I think there will be many hidden readers, enjoying your stories without commenting anything... (I'm such a hidden reader, less interacting in the internet like I do right now, just wanting to let you know... )
One day I'd like to send you some drawings.
I was so relieved of finding people, who like the Feilong\Mikhael-couple best. It's the same with me too (after the myself&feilong-couple of course... hihi), cause I assume, there will be many people, who like akihito&asami best (I'm not very interested in them).
I'd like to thank you so much for this work which costs me sleepless nights...
S

[jamie310]

Ah, and I hope Mikhael will find his memories back one day, he should be albe to realize what he had fought for... : ) ...

[anonymous]

First of all, I forgot my account log in for lj so I had to post this anonymously. My lj is chibi-tenipuri just fyi

[kajornwan]

Sorry for my late reply T_T I've been brainwashed by a life-altering anime (Legend of the Galactic Heroes) and couldn't bring myself out for weeks. I remember you, of course *hugs*, and wow to think that I've taken so long to update my readers forget their log in makes me want to repent! But thank you so much for reading this to the end. i'm glad it didn't disappoint. It was indeed a long journey and I didn't want it to end badly. I am writing in my spare time and taking on an original and well as the prequel of CI which is mainly on Mikhail and Alexei. I have to thank all my readers' kind words too for having encouraged me this far to the point that writing is addictive to me now. So for the third time, thank you for your support. I do need it especially when I feel I can't write to save my life sometimes T_T

*hugs*