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Fic: Because That's What Brothers are For

Oct 02, 2011 15:43

Title: Because That’s What Brothers are For
Author: kappamaki33
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Finn and Kurt; background Finn/Rachel and Kurt/Blaine
Warnings: discussion of sex
Spoilers: Season 2.
Summary: A late-night Wal-Mart shopping adventure.

( Kurt wanted to back away before Finn noticed him, but he couldn’t hold back his gasp of shock at the sight. Finn heard it and looked over his shoulder. Finn’s eyes went wide and his face turned red. )

Comments 11

mimiheart October 2 2011, 20:55:31 UTC

OMG, this was sweet in the weird brotherly, awkward! thing they have going on sense. Cute.

kappamaki33 October 4 2011, 01:05:48 UTC

Thanks! The Hummel-Hudson family has enough baggage that there's no way they can't be a little weird, but they're so much fun to write that way, too. ;)

lls_mutant October 2 2011, 21:03:49 UTC

Did the boxes have little length/girth size charts on the back, like pantyhose did?

This is where I completely lost it :)

This was adorable and hysterical and I really, really hope we get some Finn-Kurt interaction if they're both having sex around the same time. I absolutely loved this. I can totally see Kurt acting like that when Finn is driving, too (and the concept that yes, Finn is not a complete and utter bumbling idiot and can do basic things like breathe and drive and walk and chew gum at the same time!) I love the bickering/affection going back and forth, and the pair of them. Absolutely wonderful, and this really made me smile :) Which I really, really needed right now!

kappamaki33 October 4 2011, 01:08:34 UTC

I'm so glad someone else thinks that's funny. With jokes that weird, one always wonders. And yes, Finn is much more fun to write (and read) when his ineptness is limited to certain categories, like vocabulary, high culture, and female anatomy--things that lots of high school boys struggle with.

Glad this brightened your day!

falafel_musings October 2 2011, 23:04:15 UTC

So cute and so funny. Yet I loved the little dramatic touches like Kurt being hurt by Finn's disgust over the cashiers thinking they might be having sex with each other, only to realise it was because Finn really thought of him as his brother rather than being grossed out by gay sex or Kurt's former infatuation. You had some great echoes of Kurt & Finn's history in this and it really enriched what could have just been a straight comic oneshot. Loved it!

kappamaki33 October 4 2011, 01:11:40 UTC

Thanks so much! With this content, it just seemed like the basement would have to come up in some way, though I didn't want it to overpower the rest of the story and the humor. I'm glad the mix turned out well.

mayachain October 3 2011, 01:18:04 UTC

Hudmel brotherliness conquers all! This made a great fun read to round up my evening.

kappamaki33 October 4 2011, 01:04:05 UTC

Thanks so much--glad you enjoyed it!!

morgan_d October 3 2011, 02:16:47 UTC

Hysterical, adorable, with just that one pinch of angst to make it perfect. I absolutely loved it.

kappamaki33 October 4 2011, 01:05:04 UTC

Thanks so much! I really enjoyed writing these two in a happy context, with like you said, just a little pinch of angst in the background.