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drop_down_dead March 23 2010, 12:17:34 UTC
:3 I love it! Seems a lot less angsty than I picture Nick's past myself XD I like this version better!

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karesu March 24 2010, 00:04:17 UTC
Aw, thank you so much! I just don't see Nick's past being all angst ridden. He seems more like the type of person that life just kind of let him down instead of royally screwing him over.

Thanks a million of readin' and reviewing my story, darlin'!

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drop_down_dead March 24 2010, 00:05:57 UTC
-wriggles- I love it when people call me darlin' ;D That southern drawl sends tingles down my spine.

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nekocrouton March 23 2010, 21:30:13 UTC
Awwwwwww. <3 I really, really like your take on Nick's past, I really do. It's not nearly as angsty and horrible as some other people have made it. I mean, there's tragedy and such, but it's not like... constant angst, you know? :3

I love the reason why Nick doesn't wear black suits, that reason fits perfectly. <3 And a young!Nick in Las Vegas is just well... divine. I also like how you added him messing around with guys in there as well. :3

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karesu March 24 2010, 00:00:43 UTC
Huzzah, you like it! Thank you so much for reading my take on 'em! You have no idea how much it means to me that you like it.

Yeah I felt kinda awesome slipping in a reason for the white suit [besides, ya know, him looking damn good in it]. I can just see Nick as a younger guy in L.V. so I was like "To hell with it, it's going in there"

It seems that a few people like my version of his past. Maybe it will become the adopted truth? An' I had to get in there that Nick liked guys, 'specially ones with cute southern accents. El has a better chance then he first thought, huh? Once again, thanks a million for readin' and leaving me this awesome review!

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nekocrouton March 24 2010, 07:37:59 UTC
Hehe, I thought so too, that Ellis has a better chance if Nick has a "thing" for cute Southern accents like his. ;D

Awww, you're welcome! <3

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millionminds March 24 2010, 05:04:20 UTC
I told you I'd enjoy this fic. xD I love it! <333 The cards, the hatred of black suits, even the self-induced homosexuality. xDD

I really enjoyed your take on Nick's past. <3333 -fangirlfangirlfangirl- It was sad, but in a subtle way. Made it easier to take in, but still highly enjoyable.

Keep up the awesome work! <3

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disutansu March 24 2010, 07:04:09 UTC
Oh this is absolutely great. You touched on everything that made Nick who he is today with the cards, the black suit, the South, everything! Awesome work. I especially love Nick's answer in the very end. Cryptic to the rest of them and yet... we know because of what we read. ^_^

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karesu April 14 2010, 23:21:09 UTC
Sorry I didn't respond to this earlier!

Thank you for reading, it makes me happy to see someone out there likes my ideas. Yeah I kinda liked the cryptic ending, myself, because it's just so... Nick to have these deep thoughts over something and not let a single thing out to the rest of the world.

Thank you for reading!

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sodomites March 24 2010, 22:11:45 UTC
>:( Why aren't there more comments/feedback on this?!

I love that you hadn't taken the stereotypical approach in describing his childhood where it's almost overly angsty/he comes off as a spoiled brat rather than someone who is genuinely in need of help. This turned that around and he has reasonable examples of being angry for someone trying to come in as his father and this background seems believable. I like that it was all in depth and everyone had meaning.

akdjfladf I can't explain everything I wanted to write here because I told myself I would have a proper comment the minute I read this a few days back.

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karesu April 14 2010, 23:19:32 UTC
Why haven't I responded to this? I'm so sorry~!

Thank you so much for reading my outlook on Nick's life, I'm totally flattered that you like it! I'm glad to see people like the non-stereotypical approach to Nick's character, I was kind of worried that it would be taken as being too ambitious or something... maybe not even believable.

Once again, thank you so much for reading and liking my humble little try on his history! You are amazing!

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