Comments | karesu: Fic: Club My Diamond Heart of Spades [4/?]

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Fic: Club My Diamond Heart of Spades [4/?]

May 13, 2010 00:13

( “…an then we was runnin’ from them thugs, right, and hid in some back alley way. Thought I was gunna die, tell you what! Nick was cool as could be ‘bout the whole thing, though.” )

nellis, fanfiction, ellis, alternitive universe, nick, slash

Comments 4

purplewashere May 13 2010, 15:53:16 UTC

Have you skipped a chapter? It feels like we jumped over a lot of things.

shibaaaaaaal May 19 2010, 13:15:23 UTC

Sorry for not commenting earlier! Great new installment. I had an inkling that this was what Nick wanted XD I'm a bit disappointed it's so short it would be SO AWESOME if you can write about Nick and Ellis in one of their games or another conning people and being bromantic B) (Which I guess is a bit of a given.) Champagne must flow and surreptitious hands must slip their way up thighs.. um (I'm sure Ellis would dramatically lose a few hands (hurp durp) if Nick did that to him... heck yeah). Haha. See, what I loved about your first part was how you captured the magic of the casino and I'd love for more. There.. there doesn't even need to be any sexy bits if Ellis is getting his charm on at the tables ( ... )

disutansu May 19 2010, 17:58:36 UTC

This fic is really great. I had to go back and read the previous chapters, but Ellis having the upper hand on Nick in cards and yet so clueless at the same time is so cute. XD Really awesome. I can't wait to read more! I really enjoy Keith and Dave's relationship as well.

cruisingutopia May 30 2010, 03:05:28 UTC

I was slightly lost by the jumping as well - although the thought of Ellis being conman jr. is pretty adorable :3
The rapid-fire between Keith and Dave is funny, sometimes I get caught up in the chaos and forget who is speaking!
Still, it is fun and I am really interested to see this continue! :) <3 Thanks for a fun read!