[FIC] A Family.

[kasumikinss]

Title: A Family
Genre: AU, Angst, Fluff
Chapters: One-shot
Characters: ReitaxRuki
Author: Moi (kasumikinss)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Mentions of rape, M-preg
Disclaimer: I own no one.
Comments: I think this fic is still dedicated to rei_cookie. xD; It's been so long. Enjoy anyway~ Ruki's PoV.

Comments

[utprosim]

Perfect. No more words needed. Just... perfect.

[kasumikinss]

xD Are you serious? I thought this was the worst story I've ever written, to be honest, so thank you so much for the comment~ :)

[utprosim]

If I wasn't serious, I wouldn't even have considered posting ^.^ I'm more of a "lurker" than anything else.

I'll tell you why I think it's perfect, so you can relate a bit.

Even though you jump in time, the story stays interesting. It's a short story, but even if you made it a continued one, I wouldn't have minded the timejumps. In this case, they add up to the story instead of tearing it down.

Another plus is that there seems to be thought about all the characters. I can clearly identify three characters, with three different personalities. It often happens that personalities get mixed up or too dramatic changes happen after a confession. In your case, I think Reita still stays true to his sketched personality, after telling Ruki what bothered him.

And Reiki, just too adorable for words. I love the name you gave him. Either way, you put a lot of thought in his name (or you just lacked inspiration but I don't think so!) and in his being.

So. I loved it.

[kasumikinss]

(: Woow. That was a really long compliment, and it was amazing. I can see what you mean now but I'm still surprised my writing did all that. xD;

And about Reiki's name, I'm not exactly sure how that came about. I heard it a few times, liked it, thought it would fit a kid, and used it. o.o And it sounds like Reita and Ruki combined, soyeah. Cx

Again, thank you~ :D

[sabersenshi]

Oh wow. That was..just WOW.
Sad and yet oh-so sweet at the end.
And Reiki...great choice for a name ^^

[kasumikinss]

I'm gonna guess that's a good wow? xD

I tend to always make the endings somewhat sweet cause sad stuff is just a bit too sad. :)

Thanks~ :D I thought it was cute and it fits a little person, right?

[suzukisan]

Really, that was perfect.
I loved the baby's name, the whole story... God! <33333

Congratulations!
I don't have words to describe how much I liked this.

[kasumikinss]

<3 gfjweigjeg, that's perfectly okay. I'm just glad you liked it.

Thank you :)

[yumyumcherry]

Wow.

This was totally beautiful. I really loved it.

>.< *squeezes them and the baby* cute. <3

[kasumikinss]

Aww, thanks~ :D

xD

[shizuka_no_yume]

That was very cute. I love the mood in this one. Sad, yet gentle.
You're an amazing writer - and you capture their pesonalities very well. <3

Did you know that Reita used to be caled Reiki in one of his previous bands? :3

[kasumikinss]

I don't know about amazing... but I try. ^^; Thank you~

Indeed, I did know. :D It sounds too cute to be used for a badass image, though, don't you think? xD