Collide: Chapter Three, part four

[kyasuriin]

I am so sorry for the wait. I'm still not entirely happy with this part but I really can't afford to play with it any more, so here it is. One day I'll go back and edit and make everything perfect (or at least to my standard of perfection) but for now I offer you an imperfect part with my apologies.

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry

Comments

[momebie]

Nah, I wouldn't say so. Not inordinately anyway, if someone thinks it is.

You posting stuff for me to read at work even though I'm Not Supposed To makes my day.

*hugs*

[kyasuriin]

*hugs* yay, I'm glad. Now you have another part to read @ work :)

[kellygreen]

Awww, yay, I'm glad you finally got them to cooperate. That was lovely, darling. :)

[kyasuriin]

thanks, hun :)

[arachnethe2]

No, it's not tacky, in no way .:) And I love your story. My impatient hitting of the refresh button finally paid up.

[kyasuriin]

ahh, thank you. *eyes icon* :D

and I'm so glad you like the story, thanks for commenting!

[yue_d]

Oh god, that was gorgeous.

Sexy, yes, but gorgeous also.

"Remus," Sirius whispered and Remus opened his eyes to meet Sirius' gaze. "Look at me," Sirius said and Remus did, finding he couldn't look away even if he wanted to. He lost himself in Sirius' intense gaze, in his slow motions, in the soft noises he made. Time lost meaning here. Passing moments were measured in each thrust, each moan, each quickening of breath until time stood still and Remus heard a quick intake of breath before he felt Sirius come inside him.

That, there? That made me stop breathing. Literally, only when I got to the next paragraph did I realize I had been holding my breath. I don't know why, but that bit made me feel so... just made me feel... I wish I had someone like that to love me *sigh*

But for now I'm content cheering these two on! ^_^

But... wait... there's no more? I just spent a good part of my morning reading and ignoring homework only for there to be no more!? T_T

*tugs on your shirt* Post more, pleeeease? *puppydog eyes*

[kyasuriin]

*pets* you're wonderful. thanks for reviewing all the chapters, I have to go back and reply now to all your lovely comments. and the day will come when someone loves you like that & then it's all you'll want to do and think about and write about :) which of course means it's torturous when they're not here, but let's not talk about that, heh.

& there's more now ;)

[adria_harrison]

It's wonderful that you're going on with this even though you've given up on finishing for nano.

The story's lovely. S and R meeting each other as adults without the shared Hogwarts history is interesting. I love how you've handled it so far, and I can't wait to see how it turns out.

And I hope it's not tacky to ask, but which fic is your icon a quote from? If I've read it I can't recall exactly where.

[kyasuriin]

thanks so much :) The icon is from shoebox_project, a lovely fic that I was just rereading the other day. (this one is also from there)