Collide: Chapter 4, part three

[kyasuriin]

This is the more fun part I was talking about earlier :) Ooh look, we're almost halfway (word-count wise, anyways). Hope you enjoy this part!

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, including this part.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone,

Comments

[kawaii_tenshi27]

Ooo! Fantastic. Eager lad, that Sirius. Remus, too. ::grins happily:: Even Delilah amuses me, though I must admit, her name worries me. You just used it 'cuz it's a pretty name, right? Not because it has any special significance... Right? 'Cuz it's not like either of the boys is in love with her or anything... ANYWHO... can't wait to see what's next for our lovely lads!

[kyasuriin]

nope, no significance here. Just a song I was listening to while trying to figure out a name and then I was considering making her like the character in the song and decided against it (although I do adore the song by the Dresdon Dolls). But no, no love for her, although I think she has a bit of a crush on Remus (although, who doesn't?). thanks so much for commenting *smiles happily* It's always nice to go to sleep to nice comments :)

[chiastica]

Aww, James and Lily are so cute in this.
But guh... I seriously love how you write Remus and Sirius... I like how as a reader, we can tell that they're falling in love but they don't see it yet. How wonderful!

[kyasuriin]

I do love me some James/Lily :)
aw, I'm so glad you're liking it. I sometimes worry that I'm making them too close too soon, but I figure when you spend a lot of your time with someone, sometimes you just click and you just know (even if, as in the case of Remus, you're trying to ignore it) :) thanks so much for commenting!
(& I love your icon - it's a classic!)

[happi_feet]

Whee! Two Collide parts in one day! (Or at least I read them both today, and by "today" I mean Thursday, because of course it's actually Friday now, and I'm rambling all over your lovely comment.)

I'm sorry, I'm rubbish at commenting, but I like to hear when people have read mine, so here's my "I read it and I liked it!" comment.

[kyasuriin]

teehee, I think the same way, except when it better serves my purposes to think of it as the actual past-midnight day. I'm just like that :)

& thanks for your comment - always nice to read (as you know :) )

[paraserpiente]

Mehehehhehhehhhe. I liked the bit about flirting library cataloguing. Because I definitely flirt talking about the Dewey decimal system.

No, really.

[kyasuriin]

ha, and I thought I was the only one who did that. For some reason Remus shouting 'Discussing cataloguing!' makes me giggle every time I read that part. He doesn't stop to think that maybe his talk of libraries was turning Sirius on :p

[aquila_star]

Guh. I love how Sirius is so completely smitten, it's wonderful. I love him smitten and AU smitten without all their history is even tastier. Ineveitable, really.

You're such a tease, I hope the next chapter doesn't take long now you've taunted us.

[kyasuriin]

I do love a smitten Sirius too :) I think it's because I'm a total Remus Lupin fangirl and I love writing other people in love with him. Inevitable, really *grin* I think so.

I'm hoping to get the next part done before I get away for the weekend if schoolwork doesn't get in the way *pokes assignments*
thanks for commenting! It's so nice to wake up to comments like this one :)

[aquila_star]

Yeah, it's too easy to love Remus.

You're very welcome, it's lovely to top off the night with a chapter like this! *grins*