Collide: Chapter 4, part three

[kyasuriin]

This is the more fun part I was talking about earlier :) Ooh look, we're almost halfway (word-count wise, anyways). Hope you enjoy this part!

Title: Collide
Pairing: Remus/Sirius of Harry Potter fandom
Rating: NC-17 overall, including this part.
Summary (for all parts): AU (Remus never went to Hogwarts). Everytime Remus gets close to someone,

Comments

[looooongjacket]

guhhhh. how did i miss this on my flist last night?
this is actually in my top chaptered AU, like, ever.
reiterating what everyone else has already said, smitten!sirius is so cute. his little hand on remus' back. that is such a cute gesture. and i just love the way you're writing the falling in love (i hope, at least) bit. slowly but surely.
if you keep keeping track, that means there's more. so you should. do more.

[secretsolitaire]

Sorry, in a hurry to get to work, so I'll just leave it at...nnnngh. ♥

[kyasuriin]

ha, I know the feeling. I was in a hurry to get to class when I read this *g* hope you have a good day! :)

[wildflower47]

XD LOL. You're awsome. This is awsome. Heee.

[kyasuriin]

hee, thanks! *blushy*

[a_fallen_sister]

I got caught up on the parts I've missed today and just have to say again how really, exceptionally good this story is! It's so clever and well-written and I'm in awe of your creative touches - those little extras that remind us that even though this is AU, it's still very much a magical world - like Wilbur, for instance. And this: "I daresay that is the queerest drink I have ever seen," Sirius declared, made me giggle out loud.

So, so good! :o)

[novalinedy]

ohh you updated again and so soon. love you for it!